Poems About Deep Underground Poetry by Top Critiquers
#DeepUndergroundPoetry
DamianDeadLove
Poem Published
22nd Feb 2025 6:49am
22nd Feb 2025 6:49am
SpotLight - Keith (Vision_of_insanity)
Welcome back to SpotLight, I’m Damian DeadLove. Got another great episode tonight, that I hope you’ll enjoy. This interview segment is meant for the DU community, as a way to get to know about the poet/poetess behind the writes.
Our guest tonight is a poet who calls, New York, home. He’s been a member here since January of 2024. So a year and change, folks.
He’s a gifted poet and storyteller with some facts sprinkled in for good measure. He also knows what great music is, which gets you high marks in my book.
You all know him as,...
Our guest tonight is a poet who calls, New York, home. He’s been a member here since January of 2024. So a year and change, folks.
He’s a gifted poet and storyteller with some facts sprinkled in for good measure. He also knows what great music is, which gets you high marks in my book.
You all know him as,...
#DeepUndergroundPoetry
#prose
223 reads
50 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
26th Feb 2025 11:44am
26th Feb 2025 11:44am
Iku-Turso
My sleep was awoken by the noise of a Lion, a Cricket and a Raccoon . It was weird. I looked outside and there was a red brick road that led to my garage. I walked into the garage and their were the three having tea with cookies. They all stopped whispering and looked at me in disgust. They asked me to please leave and follow the blue brick road for wisdom and the truth. I asked if I could have one cookie. The cricket stood up and said, "if you don't leave were going to chew on your body."
I left. I decided to follow the blue brick road. As I did, I noticed the...
I left. I decided to follow the blue brick road. As I did, I noticed the...
#DeepUndergroundPoetry
#monsters
#ShortStory
94 reads
14 Comments
fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
25th Aug 2024 7:18pm
25th Aug 2024 7:18pm
DUP Mafia Romance part 3
Frank
I need to get one of my best shooters on this case, and the only person who comes to mind is Big Red.
She's done some hits for me in the past. I need to remove some of these players from the roster.
I pulled out my cell phone and dialed her number. She answered on the 1st ring.
“Frank.” She said in a whisper, letting me know she's on a job right now and her sites are on her kill shot.
“Red I need you to come here as soon as possible.”
She did not utter one word, but I heard the audible sound of swisssshhhh from a...
I need to get one of my best shooters on this case, and the only person who comes to mind is Big Red.
She's done some hits for me in the past. I need to remove some of these players from the roster.
I pulled out my cell phone and dialed her number. She answered on the 1st ring.
“Frank.” She said in a whisper, letting me know she's on a job right now and her sites are on her kill shot.
“Red I need you to come here as soon as possible.”
She did not utter one word, but I heard the audible sound of swisssshhhh from a...
#DeepUndergroundPoetry
#dirty
#sex
68 reads
16 Comments
Her
Poem Published
30th Jan 2025 2:26am
30th Jan 2025 2:26am
United in Pain
In each post
Each breath
Line, word, letter
The spaces between
We
Do
Not
Give
Up
Each breath
Line, word, letter
The spaces between
We
Do
Not
Give
Up
#courage
#DeepUndergroundPoetry
#LifeAsAWriter
#PowerOfWords
#WritingPoetry
198 reads
25 Comments
summultima
uma
uma
Poem Published
11th Aug 2019 2:01pm
11th Aug 2019 2:01pm
The Cosmic Dance
#
#LifeAsAWriter
#WritingPoetry
#art
#dance
#DeepUndergroundPoetry
919 reads
4 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
5th Dec 2024 4:37pm
5th Dec 2024 4:37pm
poets
dismal day don't be my friend
in sadness gloom I find myself
wishing in grief for a brighter tomorrow
where in I could redeem my soul
sacred dawn allow me this priviledge
to cast my lot with the fates
bringing my life to fruition
intution tells me not to follow the path of least resistance
but to blaze my own trail
through the valled of the dead
awakening to new horizons
my sorrow understood in artistic expression
to be an indelible mark on the souls I touch
reaching unto the immortal
in keeping with...
in sadness gloom I find myself
wishing in grief for a brighter tomorrow
where in I could redeem my soul
sacred dawn allow me this priviledge
to cast my lot with the fates
bringing my life to fruition
intution tells me not to follow the path of least resistance
but to blaze my own trail
through the valled of the dead
awakening to new horizons
my sorrow understood in artistic expression
to be an indelible mark on the souls I touch
reaching unto the immortal
in keeping with...
#DeepUndergroundPoetry
#metaphor
#WritingPoetry
108 reads
12 Comments
Ahavati
Tams
Tams
Poem Published
8th Feb 2025 3:33pm
8th Feb 2025 3:33pm
Hold My Beer
🍺
I didn't know how to gracefully release
an emotional undercurrent
in a manner that was clear
and concise
without becoming the monster I hate
Until the Poem said, Pssst. . .
Hold my beer.
I didn't know how to gracefully release
an emotional undercurrent
in a manner that was clear
and concise
without becoming the monster I hate
Until the Poem said, Pssst. . .
Hold my beer.
#DeepUndergroundPoetry
#LifeAsAWriter
#LifeStruggles
#minimalist
#WritingPoetry
311 reads
31 Comments
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
26th Apr 2023 7:29pm
26th Apr 2023 7:29pm
In Disguise when in fact ....
Today
I'd write about you
In disguise when in fact
Everyone knows it's you
They either stay silent and burn
Or wish they were me
Either way I win
I'd write about you
In disguise when in fact
Everyone knows it's you
They either stay silent and burn
Or wish they were me
Either way I win
#secrets
#WritingPoetry
#art
#DeepUndergroundPoetry
#success
322 reads
23 Comments
WillowsWhimsies
Poem Published
1st Dec 2024 3:53pm
1st Dec 2024 3:53pm
we are, you know...
we are more than poetry
more than our words
spread so elegantly...
...so carefully...
...across the page
consider them merely stains
...of tears
& bloodtrails...
showing the outline of our pain
but these sentiments are tempered
allowing only the briefest glimpse
miniscule peeks at the agony within
we are giants trapped inside thimbles
struggling & straining
...for more space
& these fragmented offerings shared
barely scratch the surface
of the vastness within
we are deeper...
more than our words
spread so elegantly...
...so carefully...
...across the page
consider them merely stains
...of tears
& bloodtrails...
showing the outline of our pain
but these sentiments are tempered
allowing only the briefest glimpse
miniscule peeks at the agony within
we are giants trapped inside thimbles
struggling & straining
...for more space
& these fragmented offerings shared
barely scratch the surface
of the vastness within
we are deeper...
#admiration
#DeepUndergroundPoetry
#honesty
#respect
#WritingPoetry
179 reads
14 Comments
KristinaX
Poem Published
1st Aug 2022 3:30pm
1st Aug 2022 3:30pm
Empathy
the ability to
understand and share the feelings
of others
This was too long for the Author's note so I am just putting it here.
When someone paints you as a monster or other things it's not nice. If someone feels like they need to kick me more because I said that then do what you need to I guess. I had to send someone a message due to an issue and it was hard because in this case I didn't think they meant anything bad by it and I continued to stress about how to address it because I didn't want them to feel bad. Turns out it was just...
understand and share the feelings
of others
This was too long for the Author's note so I am just putting it here.
When someone paints you as a monster or other things it's not nice. If someone feels like they need to kick me more because I said that then do what you need to I guess. I had to send someone a message due to an issue and it was hard because in this case I didn't think they meant anything bad by it and I continued to stress about how to address it because I didn't want them to feel bad. Turns out it was just...
#bullying
#confessional
#disappointment #DeepUndergroundPoetry
#disappointment #DeepUndergroundPoetry
1018 reads
I_IS_ME
Poem Published
7th Nov 2022 9:04pm
7th Nov 2022 9:04pm
Hanging Out
There are those with a problem with our eratic behavoir
Of our time on site with no specific behavior
Why are you on site so late into the night
They just don't realize that I roll solo, I do what I like
If for whatever reason I decide not to sleep
It's not about relationships or secrets to keep
I refer to all women as Ladies because that is what a man should do
Women that I message with or agree with, I seem to call Boo
In most conversations this only means friends
Except for certain plagarizing bitches that everyone knows isn't my...
Of our time on site with no specific behavior
Why are you on site so late into the night
They just don't realize that I roll solo, I do what I like
If for whatever reason I decide not to sleep
It's not about relationships or secrets to keep
I refer to all women as Ladies because that is what a man should do
Women that I message with or agree with, I seem to call Boo
In most conversations this only means friends
Except for certain plagarizing bitches that everyone knows isn't my...
#friendship
#technology
#DeepUndergroundPoetry
396 reads
2 Comments
eroseternal
Tim Eros
Tim Eros
Poem Published
29th Aug 2019 4:18am
29th Aug 2019 4:18am
Welcome Newcomers
Hello new friends, poets, extraordinaires
You have entered the Deep Underground
We welcome you and all your characters
You have no idea what you have found
Here you can write anything you want
Your thoughts, feelings, desires, and opinions
We absolutely support the first amendment
So, be ready to read things of opposition
So, read each thing with an open mind
and write the thoughts of your heart's content
You will gain so much more than you leave behind
You're exploration will have no limit
Talk about a...
You have entered the Deep Underground
We welcome you and all your characters
You have no idea what you have found
Here you can write anything you want
Your thoughts, feelings, desires, and opinions
We absolutely support the first amendment
So, be ready to read things of opposition
So, read each thing with an open mind
and write the thoughts of your heart's content
You will gain so much more than you leave behind
You're exploration will have no limit
Talk about a...
#WritingPoetry
#respect
#DeepUndergroundPoetry
440 reads
1 Comment
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