Poems for and About Best Friends Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems for and about best friends seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Paulajobi
Paula Jobi
Paula Jobi
Poem Published
16th Jan 2025 2:07pm
16th Jan 2025 2:07pm
Did I Ever Really Know You?
I've been trying bestie...
to understand the changes in you.
You can't look me in eye!
I don't know...what i can do!
I've caught you in a terrible lie
Is our friendship...going to die?
Is it that man...tell me sister...
what has he done to you?
I used to read you like a book.
Every crook and every hook...
We used to think the very same...
Sometimes joy sometimes rage!
I knew every single page...but...
You cut me off
You cut me out
You cut my heart in two!
Did I ever really know you?
...
to understand the changes in you.
You can't look me in eye!
I don't know...what i can do!
I've caught you in a terrible lie
Is our friendship...going to die?
Is it that man...tell me sister...
what has he done to you?
I used to read you like a book.
Every crook and every hook...
We used to think the very same...
Sometimes joy sometimes rage!
I knew every single page...but...
You cut me off
You cut me out
You cut my heart in two!
Did I ever really know you?
...
#BestFriend
#friendship
#lies
51 reads
4 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
12th Jan 2025 2:49am
12th Jan 2025 2:49am
Thanks for watching over me
I write these words ✍️ from pen to paper, as well l give thanks to GOD ALMIGHTY, 😇 for what he has done for me 🙏 over my journey and travel and walk. FOR I am grateful as I am yes thankful 🙏 as I am blessed ❤️ in more ways than one to still, being here right here in now. I truly thank my faith and my perseverance for not giving up without a future fight, for sure I would rather be on my feet than being on my knees for he isn't ready for me to come home 🏡 For sure I am a firm believer that it ain't over when you lose, it's over when...
#BestFriend
#LifeAsAWriter
#relationships
#StreamOfConsciousness
#uplifting
64 reads
6 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
13th Dec 2024 3:51pm
13th Dec 2024 3:51pm
GET OUT OF MY LIFE
Let's take a moment to analyze, as we reflect upon the uncrossing, of our history and life 💖 together. 🤔 For sure I have been very grateful enough to know when it's over and done , between us but yet I truly wonder is it really over between us. 🤨. For it is true that we have so much history together, it would be a shame to watch it go away and never truly return. 😔 Yet I know it would be best for me and you, being that we are always fighting and arguing back to back and going at each other like cats and dogs. 🤨 Almost to the point of no return from...
#BestFriend
#friendship
#LifeCycle
#lover
#marriage
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Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
12th Dec 2024 1:37am
12th Dec 2024 1:37am
I JUST WANT YOU TO THINK
It's me again the story teller of unspoken WORDS ✍️. For sure I just want you to know and think for thyself, 🤔 for what I want to know from you 🤔 do you know what you want and need, 🤔 or do you continue to just settle for what you don't want or need to sustain your own life. 🙏 For sure I see your thoughts process, turning in the deepness of your own SUBCONSCIOUSNESS OF YOUR MIND 🧠 LET'S dive deeper into the deepness of your own thoughts, and insight and feelings 😞 into the outer limits, of your own mind thoughts...
#BestFriend
#fatherhood
#friendship
#LifeCycle
#motherhood
100 reads
4 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
9th Dec 2024 10:16pm
9th Dec 2024 10:16pm
SPIRITUAL POWER OF A WOMAN
It's me again the story teller of words ✍️ I would like to take a moment of your time, to give my own utmost respect to all the women's of the world. 🌎 For sure if it wasn't for a strong 💪woman there wouldn't be a strong man. THAT is willing to stand and fight as a strong man. Building a strong relationship with a strong, foundation of steel and stones. 🪨 THAT together they shall always stand side by side. For sure I give them the upmost honor with respect, for if wasn't for a woman we as men could not even EXIST....
#BestFriend
#childhood
#fatherhood
#friendship
#motherhood
77 reads
3 Comments
fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
23rd Nov 2024 11:46pm
23rd Nov 2024 11:46pm
Sleepover’s (What girls talk about early teens)
Cast: Julie, Francine, Gloria and Mei
Mei
I love romantic movies—the happy ever after and the kiss.
Francine
Nope. That movie was dry. There was no tongue in that kiss
Julie
You always want tongue, Fran. I think your hormones need to be leashed
Gloria
Not my kind of movie
Fran, Julie, and Mei say at the same time
Of course not. No girl-on-girl action.
Gloria
Well, I know what gets me going, and that was not it.
Mei
I heard that Joey will make a play for you, Fran. ...
Mei
I love romantic movies—the happy ever after and the kiss.
Francine
Nope. That movie was dry. There was no tongue in that kiss
Julie
You always want tongue, Fran. I think your hormones need to be leashed
Gloria
Not my kind of movie
Fran, Julie, and Mei say at the same time
Of course not. No girl-on-girl action.
Gloria
Well, I know what gets me going, and that was not it.
Mei
I heard that Joey will make a play for you, Fran. ...
#BestFriend
#lesbian
#confusion
173 reads
11 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
19th Nov 2024 9:36pm
19th Nov 2024 9:36pm
Belonging
Navigating the new and ancient friend zone.
Piloting through skies with flying drones.
Lost in the intrigues of a drama of thrones.
Deflecting the impact of sticks and stones.
Remembering the friends, here and gone,
their laughter echoes, lives like dawn.
In these realms of heart and fantasy
w chart our paths, uniquely our own.
With courage to face what may come
and the strength to turn the unknown into home.
The bonds we share, forever strong.
In our hearts, they forever belong.
Piloting through skies with flying drones.
Lost in the intrigues of a drama of thrones.
Deflecting the impact of sticks and stones.
Remembering the friends, here and gone,
their laughter echoes, lives like dawn.
In these realms of heart and fantasy
w chart our paths, uniquely our own.
With courage to face what may come
and the strength to turn the unknown into home.
The bonds we share, forever strong.
In our hearts, they forever belong.
#BestFriend
#friendship
#honesty
#LifeCycle
#love
60 reads
6 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
16th Nov 2024 4:01am
16th Nov 2024 4:01am
STOP OVER THINKING
Stop over thinking about the things, that you have no real control over, when you try to work against a system, that is against you. 😞 Stop over thinking about the things that keep you up, till the wee hours when you are losing precious time ⌚ to sleep. 😴 Stop over thinking of ways to be able to share, your thoughts without defending and denying, thyself
how you feel and think of your own insight and feelings. 🤨JUST be thyself for why should you have to change, your way that you THINK and feel, about the betterment of your own life. 🧐 Stop over...
how you feel and think of your own insight and feelings. 🤨JUST be thyself for why should you have to change, your way that you THINK and feel, about the betterment of your own life. 🧐 Stop over...
#BestFriend
#fatherhood
#friendship
#lover
#motherhood
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Losthepoet
Adventurer
Adventurer
Poem Published
13th Oct 2024 7:29am
13th Oct 2024 7:29am
My one and only
My one
and only treasure
its been a long adventure
traveling through
15 different states
in search of myself
so i can find a love that is sacred.
God has a bit of a sense of humor
when its comes to the future
the irony in a broken heart
that has gone through the trials of life
constantly relying on the fountain of life
to restore its vitality.
So it can be the walls
that surrounds
"another heart”
that is like a beautiful
shattered vase
that is mended together
by the strings of...
and only treasure
its been a long adventure
traveling through
15 different states
in search of myself
so i can find a love that is sacred.
God has a bit of a sense of humor
when its comes to the future
the irony in a broken heart
that has gone through the trials of life
constantly relying on the fountain of life
to restore its vitality.
So it can be the walls
that surrounds
"another heart”
that is like a beautiful
shattered vase
that is mended together
by the strings of...
#BestFriend
#love
69 reads
0 Comments
I_was_rare_once
RareFaction
RareFaction
Poem Published
2nd Oct 2024 2:48am
2nd Oct 2024 2:48am
Does it ever really end?
I'm not going to say i don't miss you,
Everything's subject to change.
And I know now that you didn't trust me,
So I have carried that every day.
Mm mm hmm.
Everything back then was so blissful,
Too bad i was going insane.
And i shouldn't have made it an issue,
But i wanted some help with the pain.
(Help me)
If you move on thats fine enough to me.
(Move on)
But I've held on these rights and wrongs.
Its not easy being around me,
I break like some film in the rain.
Fools say depression is healing,
Depression was...
Everything's subject to change.
And I know now that you didn't trust me,
So I have carried that every day.
Mm mm hmm.
Everything back then was so blissful,
Too bad i was going insane.
And i shouldn't have made it an issue,
But i wanted some help with the pain.
(Help me)
If you move on thats fine enough to me.
(Move on)
But I've held on these rights and wrongs.
Its not easy being around me,
I break like some film in the rain.
Fools say depression is healing,
Depression was...
#BestFriend
#bittersweet
#breakup
159 reads
1 Comment
scatteredsilence
Poem Published
11th Sep 2024 1:39pm
11th Sep 2024 1:39pm
Perceptibly so
I want to shatter your perceptions
Create some balance, add reflections
To alter a twisting road
Tell you something you’ve never been told
Maybe open up the freeway
Assure you it’s going to be okay
Heading south over the border
Find your place in the new world order
So be happy with nothing
You don’t have to be a something
Learn to be at peace with yourself
Concentrate on keeping your health
The time is now
Perhaps somehow
I could take you deeper
After which, you may consider me a keeper ...
Create some balance, add reflections
To alter a twisting road
Tell you something you’ve never been told
Maybe open up the freeway
Assure you it’s going to be okay
Heading south over the border
Find your place in the new world order
So be happy with nothing
You don’t have to be a something
Learn to be at peace with yourself
Concentrate on keeping your health
The time is now
Perhaps somehow
I could take you deeper
After which, you may consider me a keeper ...
#BestFriend
#lover
#seductive #sex
#seductive #sex
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0 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
6th Sep 2024 12:00pm
6th Sep 2024 12:00pm
HONOR AND RESPECT
It's me again the story teller of words ✍️ I would like to tell you a story, that happen along time ago 11 yrs ago of an awakening, there on a road of a journey and travel and walk. For the elders say no one is sent to someone, by accident for it was by designed by fate and spiritual intention of deep subconsciousness. For sure it was a blessing in disguise and something that we both wanted and needed and want in our lives. For as the years passed by we became truly as inseparable as we became like fire 🔥 to a flame. For I have no regrets with my own commitment, to having...
#BestFriend
#friendship
#LifeCycle
#lover
#marriage
169 reads
3 Comments
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