BDSM Seeking Honest Critique Poems
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MasterG
Poem Published
Today 3:57am
Today 3:57am
My Queen
I take you as mine
There is nothing left but time
Your beauty is unmatched
Your spirit is unscratched
You now belong to me
There is nowhere to flee
I am your Master
You are my slave
I take what I want
You give without pause
I care for your wants
Strive for your needs
You submit to my lead
I protect your body and soul
You call me your Master
I call you mine
To protect and to hold
Come to your Master
My Girl
My Love
My Queen
There is nothing left but time
Your beauty is unmatched
Your spirit is unscratched
You now belong to me
There is nowhere to flee
I am your Master
You are my slave
I take what I want
You give without pause
I care for your wants
Strive for your needs
You submit to my lead
I protect your body and soul
You call me your Master
I call you mine
To protect and to hold
Come to your Master
My Girl
My Love
My Queen
#BDSM
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0 Comments
averageJoe69
Ron Summers
Ron Summers
Poem Published
22nd Jan 2025 11:58pm
22nd Jan 2025 11:58pm
The first actual strike
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#erotic
#lust
#passion
#temptation
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runningturtle87
Poem Published
20th Jan 2025 2:52am
20th Jan 2025 2:52am
In the Crumbs
In the Crumbs
It's our senselessness
that is the hallmark
of our nature;
every sacred moment....
burnt,
and every intimacy
and integration are left
in the crumbs
of the coals.
It's our senselessness
that is the hallmark
of our nature;
every sacred moment....
burnt,
and every intimacy
and integration are left
in the crumbs
of the coals.
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#lust
#passion
122 reads
2 Comments
averageJoe69
Ron Summers
Ron Summers
Poem Published
19th Jan 2025 11:17pm
19th Jan 2025 11:17pm
Open up my eyes
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#sexy
161 reads
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runningturtle87
Poem Published
19th Jan 2025 7:50am
19th Jan 2025 7:50am
A Few Tornadoes
A Few Tornadoes
It seems
only a matter
of some discussion
before the wires
are crossed,
and,
at
that
point,
beyond which
memory
can hold its head up,
resilient winds
can bare
withstand the charms
of those
wobegone days
in a few tornadoes.
Our losses then
make all the more
this rarer field,
these fireflies
and
daily shield.
It seems
only a matter
of some discussion
before the wires
are crossed,
and,
at
that
point,
beyond which
memory
can hold its head up,
resilient winds
can bare
withstand the charms
of those
wobegone days
in a few tornadoes.
Our losses then
make all the more
this rarer field,
these fireflies
and
daily shield.
#BDSM
#passion
#temptation
109 reads
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averageJoe69
Ron Summers
Ron Summers
Poem Published
19th Jan 2025 3:14am
19th Jan 2025 3:14am
Submissive scholar
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#erotic
#passion
#temptation
183 reads
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averageJoe69
Ron Summers
Ron Summers
Poem Published
17th Jan 2025 11:10pm
17th Jan 2025 11:10pm
Let's go to the woods
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#erotic
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#passion
#temptation
180 reads
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averageJoe69
Ron Summers
Ron Summers
Poem Published
17th Jan 2025 00:57am
17th Jan 2025 00:57am
No choice silent voice
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#erotic
#lust
#passion
#sexy
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averageJoe69
Ron Summers
Ron Summers
Poem Published
16th Jan 2025 00:15am
16th Jan 2025 00:15am
Phone play
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#passion
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fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
15th Jan 2025 4:55pm
15th Jan 2025 4:55pm
Face Sitting
You want me to sit on your face
This is neither the time nor the place
I'm not feeling to do anything in haste
In other words, what's the race
If I do decide
To let that mouth come inside
It has to be as sweet as pie
Makes me so wet as the tide
You say you can take me to the sky above
What's between those lips is as tender as a dove
What is wrong I'm giving you a little push do I need to shove
If I sit on your face, I'll suffocate you love
More like I will drown you in the depths
As I ride...
This is neither the time nor the place
I'm not feeling to do anything in haste
In other words, what's the race
If I do decide
To let that mouth come inside
It has to be as sweet as pie
Makes me so wet as the tide
You say you can take me to the sky above
What's between those lips is as tender as a dove
What is wrong I'm giving you a little push do I need to shove
If I sit on your face, I'll suffocate you love
More like I will drown you in the depths
As I ride...
#BDSM
#bisexual
#erotic
#sex
#temptation
288 reads
23 Comments
averageJoe69
Ron Summers
Ron Summers
Poem Published
15th Jan 2025 00:29am
15th Jan 2025 00:29am
Don't blink
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#sex
201 reads
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gothicsurrealism
Daniel Long
Daniel Long
Poem Published
14th Jan 2025 00:00am
14th Jan 2025 00:00am
Bitch On A Leash (part one)
She was totally unaware of what was about to happen. Once she crossed over the threshold between outside and into her home, I appeared to her out of the shadow sitting on the couch in the living room. She recognized me and had forgotten she told me earlier over the phone to let myself in.
Odd, I thought earlier. We had met at a bar the night before, she had to leave suddenly and gave me her number. When I texted her the following morning, she had apologized again for leaving so suddenly and sent me a selfie of her in the shower that morning. The water glistening on her skin, the...
Odd, I thought earlier. We had met at a bar the night before, she had to leave suddenly and gave me her number. When I texted her the following morning, she had apologized again for leaving so suddenly and sent me a selfie of her in the shower that morning. The water glistening on her skin, the...
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#dirty
#erotic
#lust
#sex
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