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The Sum of Her
every piece of her, singular, illuminating;
distance, all of her-
supernova.
breathtaking
distance, all of her-
supernova.
breathtaking
Published 6th Apr 2013
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11th Apr 2013 9:44pm
Everything you write is so eloquently put. You are an astounding poet, really. I've enjoyed reading all your stuff, can't wait to see more!
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7th May 2013 6:26pm
Hello Hellzlips,
I just joined DUP and stumbled across your works. They are so refreshing to read. I like your style of writing. Can't wait to read more. Btw, this poem is really something.
I just joined DUP and stumbled across your works. They are so refreshing to read. I like your style of writing. Can't wait to read more. Btw, this poem is really something.
7th May 2013 6:37pm
welcome to the site, and thanks for the kind words. my girl is really something
17th Oct 2013 4:02am
I was showing my bf your poems and he also said he liked this one. I wish he wrote this about me! Your girl must be pretty amazing.
21st Oct 2013 4:34am
That's really cool you and your bf enjoy it.
My girl and I sadly have been hitting some rough spots recently, but regardless, she is an incredible woman. Definitely a muse for me.
Thanks cupcake, I really needed that pick me up. Take care.
My girl and I sadly have been hitting some rough spots recently, but regardless, she is an incredible woman. Definitely a muse for me.
Thanks cupcake, I really needed that pick me up. Take care.
