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Leave Me Be
Either you can show you care,
or you don't give a single shit.
If you're in between, i hate you.
You hang on to me by a single thread,
of little concern.
You aren't actually worried for me,
but paying attention,
which makes me hide.
Can't you just fucking forget about me?
I don't exist.
I don't want to.
Just don't look at me,
Let me pretend i'm invisible.
No one hates me.
No one loves me.
No one has enough feelings to actually care about me.
It would fill my heart if someone were to pick me up,
push me against the wall,
and hurt me.
It means that they think of me,
even in the slightest.
But no.
I have to be stuck in between.
Just leave me the fuck alone if you don't even care.
It would make this so much more simple.
However, people always like to complicate things.
or you don't give a single shit.
If you're in between, i hate you.
You hang on to me by a single thread,
of little concern.
You aren't actually worried for me,
but paying attention,
which makes me hide.
Can't you just fucking forget about me?
I don't exist.
I don't want to.
Just don't look at me,
Let me pretend i'm invisible.
No one hates me.
No one loves me.
No one has enough feelings to actually care about me.
It would fill my heart if someone were to pick me up,
push me against the wall,
and hurt me.
It means that they think of me,
even in the slightest.
But no.
I have to be stuck in between.
Just leave me the fuck alone if you don't even care.
It would make this so much more simple.
However, people always like to complicate things.
Published 31st Mar 2013
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1st Apr 2013 1:34am
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1st Apr 2013 2:44am
Your self-esteem I'm guessing isn't that high, is it? It's okay, I'm not just saying these things about your poems to be nice, I really mean it.
1st Apr 2013 5:23am
Eh, naturally. And thanks so much for your kind words. Knowing your strengths just makes me that much more determined to improve my own poetry. :)
1st Apr 2013 5:38am
Good, now you're talking positively. Even if you THINK you've done poorly in the past, you can ALWAYS look forward to improving in the future.
1st Apr 2013 5:42am
Yep. The future. *cue spongebob voice* The fuuuutuuure. Weeeeooooweeeeooooweeeeooo. Sorry, my weird side kicks in eventually. X)
1st Apr 2013 1:31pm
Lol! Well, I'ma stop spamming your comments now... I think I've done enough to one poem.
1st Apr 2013 11:19pm
Like this piece. Makes me think of High School. Sometimes I wish I could turn invisible back then.
1st Apr 2013 11:35pm
