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Who do you think you are
That is who you are
Oh- another won't let you be who you want to be?
That's who you are
One who gives control to another
Seventy thousand dead (so far) in the Syrian fighting
The Government offers the Rebels truce
The Rebels say "No truce with murderers"
as the Government uses chlorine gas to wipe out an unsupportive town
Crashing through the corralling carapace of control
Rebel to Freedom Fighter to Liberator
The fiercest fighting is always between the ears
Who do you want to be-
Villian
Victim
Victor
?
What are you willing to do to get what you want?
If you answer
"Whatever it takes"
you have, in Spirit, succeeded
Oh- another won't let you be who you want to be?
That's who you are
One who gives control to another
Seventy thousand dead (so far) in the Syrian fighting
The Government offers the Rebels truce
The Rebels say "No truce with murderers"
as the Government uses chlorine gas to wipe out an unsupportive town
Crashing through the corralling carapace of control
Rebel to Freedom Fighter to Liberator
The fiercest fighting is always between the ears
Who do you want to be-
Villian
Victim
Victor
?
What are you willing to do to get what you want?
If you answer
"Whatever it takes"
you have, in Spirit, succeeded
Published 29th Mar 2013
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29th Mar 2013 4:23pm
Good start and a solid finish
well written also....
the idea behind this is great
and considering current events
this is a write of the times
write on :)
well written also....
the idea behind this is great
and considering current events
this is a write of the times
write on :)
29th Mar 2013 9:21pm
