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absolute women
what devious mind designed the bikini?
did he realize how it would torture me?
and I speak for every man in whom beats the heart
of the savage beast, whose prime directive is to
copulate, and populate the earth.
a fragile strand of almost nothing, xilinous fibre
covering nipples that elongate in the licking breeze.
a whisper of fabric concealing nocturnal lips, pearlescent
gates that harbor the home of all human desire
(her pleasure treasure).
and when this did not sustain my lustful appetite,
I traveled to nude beaches in Jamaica, to clothes-free
Cypress Cove in sun-kissed land, and Club Paradise,
so aptly named, where Eve and her identical sisters
parade proudly in all their newborn glory, shouting
unspoken pledges of decadent passion, shallow promises
that I must, as Catullus ordained, write upon the wind,
and on the rushing waves.
and thus, with unquenched yearnings, I retire to the sanctum
of my torrid (and very aquarian) dreams…
~ the first sinner was a woman ~
Published 27th Mar 2013
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"covering nipples that elongate in the licking breeze.
a whisper of fabric concealing nocturnal lips, pearlescent"<--Hell, I was lusting and 'SINNING' when I read that! Yup! Absolutely!
This was inked magnificently! xoxo
a whisper of fabric concealing nocturnal lips, pearlescent"<--Hell, I was lusting and 'SINNING' when I read that! Yup! Absolutely!
This was inked magnificently! xoxo
27th Mar 2013 9:24am
Of course it was the Male who invented the "Bikini" Jacques Heim and Louis Reard. I believe the imagination prefers something left to it.
Penned so well as always John. :)
Penned so well as always John. :)
I can relate to the first verse, having written a few poems about its background. This has inspired me to post one of them, The First Bikini Girl, in the Upbeat section. I also wrote an imaginary Anti Bikini Rant in the Erotic section, also inspired by that paragraph.
Anonymous
28th Mar 2013 2:57am
your pen sustain my lustful appetite.truly mystifying..
Anonymous
8th May 2013 1:48am
Great write! Very sexy and descriptive. :)
23rd Jul 2016 9:09am
