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Those Kisses Are Sweeter Then Wine
You can find so many opinions
that I can only speak for me
but grown women
are my preferred cup of tea
not in chronological measures
instead in outlook and views
for they possess the qualities
that holds at bay my blues
like being confident in reaching out
for what she needs and expects
not caring about society's conventions
and yet demanding that modicum of respect
dazzling others in the office
but targeting her prey for private times
keep both her mind and body
forever "gentle on my mind"
that I can only speak for me
but grown women
are my preferred cup of tea
not in chronological measures
instead in outlook and views
for they possess the qualities
that holds at bay my blues
like being confident in reaching out
for what she needs and expects
not caring about society's conventions
and yet demanding that modicum of respect
dazzling others in the office
but targeting her prey for private times
keep both her mind and body
forever "gentle on my mind"
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Re: Those Kisses Are Sweeter Then Wine
25th Mar 2013 5:57am
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25th Mar 2013 8:05am
We all like to think we have learned a bit about what really makes us happy with the passing of time.
Thanks for the feedback!
Thanks for the feedback!
Re: Those Kisses Are Sweeter Then Wine
25th Mar 2013 11:07am
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25th Mar 2013 2:35pm
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25th Mar 2013 1:28pm
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re: Re: Those Kisses Are Sweeter Then Wine
Okay I will confess, part of the inspiration here was Paul McCartney's first two wives. The first was the great love of his life. The second who just happened to be much younger just didn't seem to be compatible. Not saying the age was the problem but wow some of the barbs she threw at him during the divorce were awful. He seems to have figured it out with number three---at least his children like her.
Re: Those Kisses Are Sweeter Then Wine
25th Mar 2013 8:40pm
I really enjoyed this write. Great comfortable flow and thought process tyvm syn
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25th Mar 2013 9:09pm
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Re: Those Kisses Are Sweeter Then Wine
26th Mar 2013 1:23am
Sometimes your words can be delivered so sexy, even when you're not trying to be sensual!
This ink was a mental turn-on, for this grown and sexy woman right here.
Reading list ribbon!
This ink was a mental turn-on, for this grown and sexy woman right here.
Reading list ribbon!
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re: Re: Those Kisses Are Sweeter Then Wine
26th Mar 2013 1:28am
Thank you rain. I think I speak for many when I say it feels good to know someone else found pleasure what was originally a blank screen or an empty piece of paper.
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re: Re: Those Kisses Are Sweeter Then Wine
26th Mar 2013 2:14am
Thanks, you just alerted me to a typo. I think it should be "bay" and not "bey"!
You comments are always so positive even, when a writer asks for an honest comment and therefore they don't have to be! May you always have the strength to stay on a positive tip.
You comments are always so positive even, when a writer asks for an honest comment and therefore they don't have to be! May you always have the strength to stay on a positive tip.
Re: Those Kisses Are Sweeter Then Wine
26th Mar 2013 3:45am
As a mature woman I really can appreciate the appreciation you have for this mature woman....
I enjoyed this poem very much!!!!! :)
I enjoyed this poem very much!!!!! :)
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re: Re: Those Kisses Are Sweeter Then Wine
26th Mar 2013 5:46pm
Re: Those Kisses Are Sweeter Then Wine
26th Mar 2013 1:49pm
Wine does taste better with age and so does women..based on my experience, I believe we agree on this!
By the way, how come I'm not getting any of your poems in my updates list? I thought something happened to you that's why I checked you out.
Have a wonderful and solemn Holy Week my friend.
By the way, how come I'm not getting any of your poems in my updates list? I thought something happened to you that's why I checked you out.
Have a wonderful and solemn Holy Week my friend.
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re: Re: Those Kisses Are Sweeter Then Wine
17th May 2013 5:25pm
I think DU is going through growing pains. I have had some erratic episodes with the page. Maybe I was just asleep at the wheel but it wasn't until now that I was aware of your comment.
Really I can only talk about my preference. I have come across people who feel different.
Really I can only talk about my preference. I have come across people who feel different.
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15th Jun 2013 4:54pm
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re: Re: Those Kisses Are Sweeter Then Wine
15th Jun 2013 5:46pm
Only God has the right to love them? What if they are married? You need to explain that comment---please!
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