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There Must Be Some Misunderstanding
Oh yeah he put me in my place
a puzzled look must have been on my face
flirting with a lass I thought unattached
found out there is a guy who may have a latch
sent a message and found out it was him
lost her cell in his car the exchange was grim
accusatory like a stalker to his girl
playing ignorant of the words she did twirl
the revelation is now knowing she has a man
puts into to question a meeting we may plan
at the least they have a difference of views
in what their relationship construes
but of word of caution to the guy I suggest
if really her man he better watch for the pests
because even if we never meet
there are others that find attractive that heat
and for whom hundreds of miles isn't a divide
so dude is that ego and pride
cause if you have a claim true and real
better secure a more two-sided feel!
a puzzled look must have been on my face
flirting with a lass I thought unattached
found out there is a guy who may have a latch
sent a message and found out it was him
lost her cell in his car the exchange was grim
accusatory like a stalker to his girl
playing ignorant of the words she did twirl
the revelation is now knowing she has a man
puts into to question a meeting we may plan
at the least they have a difference of views
in what their relationship construes
but of word of caution to the guy I suggest
if really her man he better watch for the pests
because even if we never meet
there are others that find attractive that heat
and for whom hundreds of miles isn't a divide
so dude is that ego and pride
cause if you have a claim true and real
better secure a more two-sided feel!
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Re: There Must Be Some Misunderstanding
25th Mar 2013 5:54am
Lol, Quite the unfortunate write...well...for someone...Excellent pen my Friend!!!
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25th Mar 2013 8:01am
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25th Mar 2013 4:10pm
indeed...tis one of the reasons ...I say so much and too much detail at times...never do I wish to be misunderstood...communication is rare between folks at times...sad that...
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Re: There Must Be Some Misunderstanding
25th Mar 2013 6:25am
Uh Oh! Sounds like someone is loosing here. Not sure which side though. Hers , his, his or all! Nice write! :)
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re: Re: There Must Be Some Misunderstanding
25th Mar 2013 8:02am
The technology may change but the differing points of view never seem to cease.
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Anonymous
25th Mar 2013 8:23am
I enjoy the way you have interjected that even if she is his, she may not stay that way unless he gets it together..so often how relationships end-with a false sense of security and a big heap of complacency til it's realized that the toy you got bored with-is someone else s new favorite :-).
I enjoyed this immensely..and like the maturity of your take on it all.
I enjoyed this immensely..and like the maturity of your take on it all.

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re: Re: There Must Be Some Misunderstanding
25th Mar 2013 2:58pm
You summed up what I was trying to say perfectly. Being the vain, self-centered male, my first instinct was to interject some fantasy about taking her away from him but when it comes down to it, a relationship equals two parts.
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re: Re: There Must Be Some Misunderstanding
25th Mar 2013 3:04pm
Thanks. I still am speechless about some of the triangles created for tv, but with each of the three traditional networks now down to 1 soap opera a piece, fantasy has been replaced by reality (which ends up being scripted into fantasy anyway)
Re: There Must Be Some Misunderstanding
25th Mar 2013 2:41pm
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25th Mar 2013 3:09pm
In this case the land minds are evident regardless of my involvement. My claim at least for now will be subtle.
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25th Mar 2013 9:16pm
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25th Mar 2013 9:43pm