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relevance to none but not to some
why preach and spit
when practice you can't
nor teach that shit
breaks screech
mind breach
broach
belly up
on approach
face to the floor
you kiss the cock
roach
infatuated by words
never spoke
yet the facade
masquerade
if existed
would fade
like a bleached
shit stain
on yo asshole
yo lip
spit
dribble
trip
configure
lithium deficiency
disfigure disorder
fuck it
just blame the weather..!!
coz shit will stick
without mortar
when practice you can't
nor teach that shit
breaks screech
mind breach
broach
belly up
on approach
face to the floor
you kiss the cock
roach
infatuated by words
never spoke
yet the facade
masquerade
if existed
would fade
like a bleached
shit stain
on yo asshole
yo lip
spit
dribble
trip
configure
lithium deficiency
disfigure disorder
fuck it
just blame the weather..!!
coz shit will stick
without mortar
Published 22nd Mar 2013
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22nd Mar 2013 2:43am
Awesome, I dig the subject and this flowed right off the the tongue,and its well written ...:)
22nd Mar 2013 2:52am
thanks Nikkimoe..
its a highly overlooked subject
thanks for stopping by
its a highly overlooked subject
thanks for stopping by
22nd Mar 2013 5:45am
22nd Mar 2013 6:14am
more about balance Atakti
and the fact some of our bodies nutrients are poisons
and the fact some of our bodies nutrients are poisons
Anonymous
22nd Mar 2013 8:16am
I could with some sort trip now lol awesome;)
22nd Mar 2013 9:07am
Anonymous
22nd Mar 2013 1:50pm
I like the angry style and your word choices..descriptive. Off balanced and toxic-not good. Well written
22nd Mar 2013 4:16pm
22nd Mar 2013 9:55pm
23rd Mar 2013 10:18pm
23rd Mar 2013 3:11pm
I don't know if this was to put a smile on my face, but it did....does that make me sick...LOL I enjoyed your imagery and metaphors. Looking forward to reading more...
23rd Mar 2013 10:20pm
Anonymous
24th Mar 2013 00:30am
Love it from the title to the last line - each line reads like the chop of an axe.
24th Mar 2013 00:47am
25th Mar 2013 8:45pm
Much enjoyed, unique piece.
infatuated by words
never spoke
yet the facade
masquerade
if existed
would fade
Impressive.
infatuated by words
never spoke
yet the facade
masquerade
if existed
would fade
Impressive.
25th Mar 2013 9:23pm
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