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orgasm haiku iv
your breath is a soft sensual lullaby's
we get lost in the sounds
and time disappears (everything's disappeared)
we get lost in the sounds
and time disappears (everything's disappeared)
Published 19th Sep 2010
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Anonymous
19th Sep 2010 2:30pm
The sense of disappearing is beautiful, as though the lover's breath is like an eraser. Reminds me of the story of the mermaid's siren song, and how they use it to lure sailors to their death, for some reason.
19th Sep 2010 11:06pm
speaking of a siren song laura was suppose to purr for me but she's too shy :(
28th Sep 2010 7:17pm
28th Sep 2010 9:37pm
