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RAW DOG
Watch the raw dog
As he roams down the street
Fiending for action
Hungry for meat
Always going in
No concern for protection
Only one mission
Satisfying erection
No emotion
Cept an occasional smile
When in position
Doggy style
Grunting…growling
He howls at the moon
And now he is going
After coming too soon
Then after he learns
What his brazenness earned him
He looks down and discovers
The kitty cat burned him!
As he roams down the street
Fiending for action
Hungry for meat
Always going in
No concern for protection
Only one mission
Satisfying erection
No emotion
Cept an occasional smile
When in position
Doggy style
Grunting…growling
He howls at the moon
And now he is going
After coming too soon
Then after he learns
What his brazenness earned him
He looks down and discovers
The kitty cat burned him!
Published 18th Mar 2013
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19th Mar 2013 5:15pm
19th Mar 2013 9:42pm
I don't know how you do it. I'm deeply envious of your concision- not one superfluous word-your control of sequence and the well rounded ending.
20th Mar 2013 10:05pm
