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lizzie borden
Entered in shortest Best Poem Competition
a simple whack or two
with the ax wouldn't do
she kept on whacking
until she was through
reducing the family
to only two
a simple whack or two
with the ax wouldn't do
she kept on whacking
until she was through
reducing the family
to only two
Published 16th Mar 2013
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16th Mar 2013 5:49pm
16th Mar 2013 6:30pm
Many thanks, dear lady. Maybe one of these days I'll win one of them :)
Faith
Faith
16th Mar 2013 6:47pm
16th Mar 2013 7:06pm
Anonymous
16th Mar 2013 6:56pm
*smiles* Excellent & intriguing piece, Faith. I love this poem. Good luck in the comp. my friend! xoxo
Carlene
Carlene
16th Mar 2013 7:10pm
I appreciate that so much, Carlene. Thank you for your wonderful comments and good wishes. It would be nice to win one of them sometime. I'm thrilled you liked my poem so much. xoxo
Faith
Faith
16th Mar 2013 7:14pm
16th Mar 2013 7:23pm
Cassie, thank you for both your lovely comments and tnd good wishes. That's so sweet of you! :)
Faith
Faith
Anonymous
- Edited 16th Mar 2013 10:15pm
16th Mar 2013 10:14pm
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16th Mar 2013 10:47pm
Awww, any time I can make you smile, Gabe, it is a good thing! Glad you enjoyed my dark, little poem. xoxo
Faith
Faith
