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times have changed
Entered in the shortest Best Poem Competition
times have changed-
you have your life
your wife and soon
to be born baby
don't blame me
if i've found happiness
in his arms and love
in his approach-
i need love like
all the rest
times have changed-
you have your life
your wife and soon
to be born baby
don't blame me
if i've found happiness
in his arms and love
in his approach-
i need love like
all the rest
Published 16th Mar 2013
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16th Mar 2013 5:49pm
How easy it is to forget another's needs Faith when they are so wrapped up in their own.
Beautifully said :)
Beautifully said :)
16th Mar 2013 6:29pm
16th Mar 2013 6:46pm
Anonymous
16th Mar 2013 7:01pm
An insightful, well-written piece, Faith! Wonderful ink, as always! Enjoyed! :)
Carlene
Carlene
16th Mar 2013 7:04pm
16th Mar 2013 7:23pm
Fantastic write Faith, everyone deserves love and happiness, good luck in the comp.....Cassie
16th Mar 2013 7:25pm
Thanks again, Cassie! I'm thrilled you liked my poem so much! I appreciate your good wishes, too! :)
Faith
Faith
