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Breathing in my submission
I breathe him in
I will kneel
I will bow
I will do anything for him
I'm his now
A Dominant and submissive
We have our own rules
Those who don’t understand
Do not call them fools..
Just like us
They live as they do
Accepting their lives
As we do too
for his Dominance
gives me the drive
for my submission
to truly thrive
I will kneel
I will bow
I will do anything for him
I'm his now
A Dominant and submissive
We have our own rules
Those who don’t understand
Do not call them fools..
Just like us
They live as they do
Accepting their lives
As we do too
for his Dominance
gives me the drive
for my submission
to truly thrive
Published 16th Mar 2013
| Edited 18th Mar 2013
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16th Mar 2013 10:05am
there's always the question of who is controlling who....and it's a nice question to think about...I like the depth and simplicity of this poem.
16th Mar 2013 10:43am
I agree with you there with regard to the question..We had a conversation about being Dominant in submission and being submissive in Dominance..hence me writing this really!
Anonymous
16th Mar 2013 6:14pm
Funny but true.....cool read:)
16th Mar 2013 9:49pm
such a submissive, I like your poems and I followed you and liked the poem
17th Mar 2013 10:30pm
If I'm honest I never realised that I adore being submissive ...us different horses relish our course. Love how you expressed this one. Thank you for opening my mind to me. Synth
18th Mar 2013 3:23pm
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20th Sep 2013 6:12am
Hello geminisb; Really great write right here... There is a certain love that can only be reached and felt with a complete submission, have always felt... It is like you said, they may not understand, an live their lives as they do, a shame sometimes, they are missing out on a special closeness I feel...
11th Oct 2013 8:00pm
Thank you for your comments. It is a shame not all understand, but a joy when people do! :)
