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The Final Page
I gathered up my underestimated armies
of punctuation and chosen letters,
proceeding to turn the heaviest page.
I dot my anticipation with an ellipses...
practicing the secretive art of cliff hanging,
finger tips slipping, slipping, gone.
The final-fatal-page is set unyielding.
It stares adamant minded and thick skinned,
thrumming with seductive enigma temptations.
I feel Cupids thrill through the papyrus,
an extra helping of lightning zeal from
Zeus electrifies my blood fierce.
Future is a waiting game.
Eventually the weight lifts.
Adrenaline curls in on herself
increasing heart rate by 50%,
kick-starting expected reactions.
One sentence drains my blood sallow,
closing in on my arteries
as steel shock.
"The End"
of punctuation and chosen letters,
proceeding to turn the heaviest page.
I dot my anticipation with an ellipses...
practicing the secretive art of cliff hanging,
finger tips slipping, slipping, gone.
The final-fatal-page is set unyielding.
It stares adamant minded and thick skinned,
thrumming with seductive enigma temptations.
I feel Cupids thrill through the papyrus,
an extra helping of lightning zeal from
Zeus electrifies my blood fierce.
Future is a waiting game.
Eventually the weight lifts.
Adrenaline curls in on herself
increasing heart rate by 50%,
kick-starting expected reactions.
One sentence drains my blood sallow,
closing in on my arteries
as steel shock.
"The End"
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Re: The Final Page
15th Mar 2013 8:21pm
Great Idea for a write!!!
man I love your words!!!
a head trip made without drugs!
Excellent!!!!!!
man I love your words!!!
a head trip made without drugs!
Excellent!!!!!!
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Anonymous
16th Mar 2013 00:19am
Love the ideas in this excellent piece & this:
The final-fatal-page is set unyielding.
It stares adamant minded and thick skinned,
thrumming with seductive enigma temptations.
Beautiful words & phrasing, Scribbler. Great job, my friend! :)
Carlene
The final-fatal-page is set unyielding.
It stares adamant minded and thick skinned,
thrumming with seductive enigma temptations.
Beautiful words & phrasing, Scribbler. Great job, my friend! :)
Carlene
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16th Mar 2013 1:18pm
Stumbled on this quite by accident and im glad o did, a amazing idea for a poem loving the last stanza will have to read more.
Great stuff
cheers
Marcus
Great stuff
cheers
Marcus
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Anonymous
19th Mar 2013 8:21am
Very much enjoyed this poem of yours, Scribbler!
The final page, waiting to write its own end....
The final page, waiting to write its own end....
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Anonymous
6th Apr 2013 12:36pm
Awesome choice of words, on a trance with this read:)
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