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Sometimes
Sometimes just wants to dissolve
if i shut my eyes tight
will this grip drip down lightly
just melt off
drip down lightly
resolve
if i shut my eyes tight
will this grip drip down lightly
just melt off
drip down lightly
resolve
Published 14th Mar 2013
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Anonymous
21st May 2013 2:05pm
What is the supposed form of this, its enjamblement leaves no contribution to semantics or aesthetics or is the complete disregard for caesura a faux pas or your part?
