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A Song Remembers
you may forget
what you were wearin when you first met
or the way her beauty made you mumble under your breath
you may even forget
what it felt like the first time you took her hand
or felt her kiss
on your lips
but
a song remembers
every word has a melody
every feeling has a cord
that plays on your heart
it can lift you up
or tear you apart
your memory made fade
and you could lose all track of the days
but when you hear that beat
it'll put a smile on your face
oh a song remembers
you might not remember their first word
or their first steps
maybe you had to work
and you could never let go of that hurt
now that you're a little older
maybe you can't recall when you first got to hold her
in that little pink blanket
but
a song remembers
every word has a melody
every feeling has a cord
that plays on your heart
it can lift you up
or tear you apart
your memory made fade
and you could lose all track of the days
but when you hear that beat
it'll put a smile on your face
oh a song remembers
yeah i know it happens to the best of us
we all lose a little of our mind
to the hands of time
but
a song remembers
every word has a melody
every feeling has a cord
that plays on your heart
it can lift you up
or tear you apart
your memory made fade
and you could lose all track of the days
but when you hear that beat
it'll put a smile on your face
oh a song remembers
what you were wearin when you first met
or the way her beauty made you mumble under your breath
you may even forget
what it felt like the first time you took her hand
or felt her kiss
on your lips
but
a song remembers
every word has a melody
every feeling has a cord
that plays on your heart
it can lift you up
or tear you apart
your memory made fade
and you could lose all track of the days
but when you hear that beat
it'll put a smile on your face
oh a song remembers
you might not remember their first word
or their first steps
maybe you had to work
and you could never let go of that hurt
now that you're a little older
maybe you can't recall when you first got to hold her
in that little pink blanket
but
a song remembers
every word has a melody
every feeling has a cord
that plays on your heart
it can lift you up
or tear you apart
your memory made fade
and you could lose all track of the days
but when you hear that beat
it'll put a smile on your face
oh a song remembers
yeah i know it happens to the best of us
we all lose a little of our mind
to the hands of time
but
a song remembers
every word has a melody
every feeling has a cord
that plays on your heart
it can lift you up
or tear you apart
your memory made fade
and you could lose all track of the days
but when you hear that beat
it'll put a smile on your face
oh a song remembers
Published 13th Mar 2013
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Anonymous
13th Mar 2013 7:07pm
and they never forget zinger
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Anonymous
13th Mar 2013 7:08pm
zinger,
Cool idea for a song ; ) I think if you kept the main idea of the song wrapped around "that little pink blanket" it may help to pull it all together. Then just a little rewording of the first verse? And was wondering about the length of your chorus....maybe you've already got the melody nailed down? If not, you may be able to drop the 2 lines "your memory made fade /
and you could lose all track of the days" since you use this same idea in your little 3 line lift at the end. (I'm a sucker for those 3 line lifts) ; ) Of course these are just my ideas and you are free to hit the old delete button LOL!!! But like I said at the beginning, cool idea for a song!
tornado
Cool idea for a song ; ) I think if you kept the main idea of the song wrapped around "that little pink blanket" it may help to pull it all together. Then just a little rewording of the first verse? And was wondering about the length of your chorus....maybe you've already got the melody nailed down? If not, you may be able to drop the 2 lines "your memory made fade /
and you could lose all track of the days" since you use this same idea in your little 3 line lift at the end. (I'm a sucker for those 3 line lifts) ; ) Of course these are just my ideas and you are free to hit the old delete button LOL!!! But like I said at the beginning, cool idea for a song!
tornado
13th Mar 2013 7:13pm
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