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Aesthetic Suspension
Pallid visage and chapped lips
Wide green eyes encircled with black
Stare In eternal momentum.
Such a lovely lady
So why was she hung?
Was it some wrong doing on her behalf?
Let's assume she spoke too cheekily.
The corpse swings and sways
With every icy winter breeze
Always looking and Never Blinking
Wide green eyes encircled with black
Stare In eternal momentum.
Such a lovely lady
So why was she hung?
Was it some wrong doing on her behalf?
Let's assume she spoke too cheekily.
The corpse swings and sways
With every icy winter breeze
Always looking and Never Blinking
Published 8th Mar 2013
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9th Mar 2013 6:19am
Very good title, strong details to start the poem,intrigue in the second stanza and a haunting image in the third stanza add up to a well written piece. Nice job!
