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SUCCUBUS
(Inspired by words and accompanying picture - hence description below - of Strider's poem "A Dream to Sleep".)
She comes in a veil (not that of a bride)
To lure the sleepy-headed man inside
Her curvaceous form, devoid of raiment,
Available for his entertainment.
She gestures with ever-welcoming arms
And bids him enjoy her succulent charms.
But, through the otherwise revealing lace
The beholder cannot see her real face,
Almost a void, as dark as Death itself.
She’s certainly no angel of good health,
For this faux woman is not one of us:
She is the deadly spirit SUCCUBUS.
She comes in a veil (not that of a bride)
To lure the sleepy-headed man inside
Her curvaceous form, devoid of raiment,
Available for his entertainment.
She gestures with ever-welcoming arms
And bids him enjoy her succulent charms.
But, through the otherwise revealing lace
The beholder cannot see her real face,
Almost a void, as dark as Death itself.
She’s certainly no angel of good health,
For this faux woman is not one of us:
She is the deadly spirit SUCCUBUS.
Published 8th Mar 2013
| Edited 9th Mar 2013
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Anonymous
8th Mar 2013 9:51pm
Nice write Solomon...yes, they sound deadly indeed!
I am inspired to write something similar...thanks.
Strider.
I am inspired to write something similar...thanks.
Strider.
9th Mar 2013 5:36pm
And here was I thinking I got married the first time! Seems I invoked a succubus! ;-)
Nice pen poet.
Nice pen poet.
10th Mar 2013 5:41pm
Beware of the weaver of wicked wiles
evil is embeded in her smile
blasphemy lies within her grin
her pouty lips leak liquid sin
intriguing, but you better beware
prepare for mayhem and torturous despair
her bewitching venom is spellbinding damnation
especially for those with an oral fixation
hells fire rain when you moan her name
sulfuric acid eats away at your brain
she sucks,and SUCks Until you BUSt
explode in rapturous chaotic lust
all that remains is bones and dust
hence her name..succubus!
i couldnt resisted sharing my 2 cents lol....i absolutely loved this!
evil is embeded in her smile
blasphemy lies within her grin
her pouty lips leak liquid sin
intriguing, but you better beware
prepare for mayhem and torturous despair
her bewitching venom is spellbinding damnation
especially for those with an oral fixation
hells fire rain when you moan her name
sulfuric acid eats away at your brain
she sucks,and SUCks Until you BUSt
explode in rapturous chaotic lust
all that remains is bones and dust
hence her name..succubus!
i couldnt resisted sharing my 2 cents lol....i absolutely loved this!
10th Mar 2013 7:48pm
Longest poem I have inspired in a comment, I like the clever weaving of the spirit's name towards the end.
11th Mar 2013 00:24am
15th Sep 2018 9:44pm
I like this poem about a Succubus you wrote years ago. From reading some of your older works of art, you are still very much talented I see.
