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Created For Disaster
We topple off the edge..
crumble at the cliff
break with the weight,
of things heavier than
our hearts..
Dream big
and
cry for the loss..
excel and falter...
fly to fall..
like a ballet in motion
a beautiful tragedy
We are created for disaster.
crumble at the cliff
break with the weight,
of things heavier than
our hearts..
Dream big
and
cry for the loss..
excel and falter...
fly to fall..
like a ballet in motion
a beautiful tragedy
We are created for disaster.
Published 7th Mar 2013
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7th Mar 2013 4:43pm
So much falls into oblivion through ones life until we fall ourselves.
Words in motion. Wonderful Lily.
Words in motion. Wonderful Lily.
Anonymous
7th Mar 2013 5:26pm
Nicely written and true, river lily
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- Edited 1st May 2021 7:45am
7th Mar 2013 7:48pm
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Anonymous
7th Mar 2013 8:28pm
Love it. Short but so precise. Good job, RiverLily.
8th Mar 2013 5:21am
"like a ballet in motion, a beautiful tragedy." Epic. This is life condensed in a beautifully written short poem! It couldn't be more true. We live our lives for a higher goal and die with heavy regret when we don't succeed. Great write!
24th Mar 2013 4:01pm
Awesome imagery. I couldn't help feeling like there's something missing, though.
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