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Breathless
The dark pearl
rolled his way in
Half- Fury, Half - Gold
Goddess, I hate gold.
My womb crushed by distilled glory,
Water despised theee,
Thee despised thee,
the thunder rolls and I can't breathe
When there is no where else to roll
I caught a redemptive tear on a
broken floor board
Now I'm stillborn once more
rolled his way in
Half- Fury, Half - Gold
Goddess, I hate gold.
My womb crushed by distilled glory,
Water despised theee,
Thee despised thee,
the thunder rolls and I can't breathe
When there is no where else to roll
I caught a redemptive tear on a
broken floor board
Now I'm stillborn once more
Published 5th Mar 2013
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5th Mar 2013 11:15pm
Thee despised thee,
the thunder rolls and I can't breathe
Steady rolling words, which I liked. Hope you Dec poem comp went okay?
the thunder rolls and I can't breathe
Steady rolling words, which I liked. Hope you Dec poem comp went okay?
6th Mar 2013 6:15pm
6th Mar 2013 11:05pm
you entered a poem comp elsewhere which was to be judged sometime in Dec? ~ unless my brain defeats me in which case .................... Durr
7th Mar 2013 3:14pm
O yes! Definitely! I made poet laureate of the year at the college. I was so amazed with myself
9th Mar 2013 00:29am
9th Mar 2013 9:09pm
