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ME AND JACK
Feeling a bit down and wearing a frown,
Went and picked Jack up, out the other side of town,
Returned home, to my place on the mountain,
With Jack the only one I can count on,
to change my hue from blue.
Fire crackling in the hearth
After our luxurious, scented oil bath,
Settled on the couch with Jack close by my side,
Of him I did Imbibe, my thirst no need hide,
A long drawn out plan to dissolve my depression,
We go way back Jack and I,
He is my favorite obsession,
Deriving great pleasure,
When we are together,
No man can put asunder the complete and utter wonder,
of
OLD JACK DANIELS AND I
Went and picked Jack up, out the other side of town,
Returned home, to my place on the mountain,
With Jack the only one I can count on,
to change my hue from blue.
Fire crackling in the hearth
After our luxurious, scented oil bath,
Settled on the couch with Jack close by my side,
Of him I did Imbibe, my thirst no need hide,
A long drawn out plan to dissolve my depression,
We go way back Jack and I,
He is my favorite obsession,
Deriving great pleasure,
When we are together,
No man can put asunder the complete and utter wonder,
of
OLD JACK DANIELS AND I
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Re: ME AND JACK
4th Mar 2013 00:18am
Very cleverly written with a great surprize ending...very enjoyable read, Cassie :)
Faith
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re: Re: ME AND JACK
4th Mar 2013 2:26am
Thank you Faith, for your very valuable opinion, it is much appreciated...Cassie
Re: ME AND JACK
4th Mar 2013 1:22am
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4th Mar 2013 2:27am
Thank you Princess, for taking the time to read, and for your valued opinion.....Cassie
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Anonymous
4th Mar 2013 3:12am
Liked it and can relate cassie
strider
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re: Re: ME AND JACK
4th Mar 2013 5:46am
Strider,
Thank you so very much, I appreciate your valued opinion, have been reading everyone's poetry trying to see what I can come up with, a lot of them are brilliant, and I hope one day I can match them..Cassie
Thank you so very much, I appreciate your valued opinion, have been reading everyone's poetry trying to see what I can come up with, a lot of them are brilliant, and I hope one day I can match them..Cassie
Re: ME AND JACK
5th Mar 2013 3:58am
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Thank you again Fire, comments from such wonderful writer as yourself, have made my day today a little brighter....Cassie
Re: ME AND JACK
5th Mar 2013 3:36pm
Cassie:
The ending ("Jack Daniels")completely threw me. It was so unexpected. You are a remarkable poet, with a gift for rhyme and rhythm. I'll remember your poem for a long, long time.
marcella1
The ending ("Jack Daniels")completely threw me. It was so unexpected. You are a remarkable poet, with a gift for rhyme and rhythm. I'll remember your poem for a long, long time.
marcella1
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re: Re: ME AND JACK
12th Mar 2013 6:43am
Marcella Thank you, from one so talented as you, means a lot to me, apologies for the delay in responding.......Cassie
Re: ME AND JACK
12th Apr 2013 7:04am
Jack also happens to be a really good friend of mine haha I loved the flow of this write! Very good rhyming!
My favorite line was "We go way back Jack and I,
He is my favorite obsession" Awesomeness! Keep up the cool writes!
My favorite line was "We go way back Jack and I,
He is my favorite obsession" Awesomeness! Keep up the cool writes!
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28th Jun 2014 00:42am
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Anonymous
7th Jul 2014 9:50am
Haha wow, that ending caught me completely off guard! That's some serious skill right there.
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