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pillow talk
Entered in the "Might have been Competition"
when you spoke
about sex
you always said
the pillow talk
afterwards was
your favorite part
you said you’d
love to be
with me and
share what was
in your heart
and as i think
of you now
i sometimes wonder
what you
might’ve said
had we ended
up in bed
now i guess that
i will never know
since i wanted
to be friends instead
when you spoke
about sex
you always said
the pillow talk
afterwards was
your favorite part
you said you’d
love to be
with me and
share what was
in your heart
and as i think
of you now
i sometimes wonder
what you
might’ve said
had we ended
up in bed
now i guess that
i will never know
since i wanted
to be friends instead
Written by
faithmairee
(Faith Elizabeth Brigham)
Published 3rd Mar 2013
| Edited 7th Mar 2013
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Re: pillow talk
Anonymous
3rd Mar 2013 2:39am
A very charming, wisdom-filled write, Faith. Love the rhyming sounds in this very lovely poem. Beautiful ink, as always! :)
Carlene
Carlene
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3rd Mar 2013 10:49am
Re: pillow talk
3rd Mar 2013 3:03am
Loved this piece sweets!!
Study long, study wrong
I felt you
Sir Lancelott
Study long, study wrong
I felt you
Sir Lancelott
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3rd Mar 2013 10:49am
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3rd Mar 2013 6:00am
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3rd Mar 2013 10:50am
Anonymous
- Edited 1st May 2021 7:45am
3rd Mar 2013 10:37am
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3rd Mar 2013 10:51am
Re: pillow talk
3rd Mar 2013 11:58am
More than just a poem..In a few words it nicely depicts the soul, hurt by the male chaonistic attitude towards seeking relation with a femal specie.I have full appreciation for this nice piece of writing.
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re: Re: pillow talk
Thank you for your wonderful remarks. I really appreciate them and am honored you put it on your reading list. :)
Faith
Faith
Re: pillow talk
3rd Mar 2013 9:01pm
re: Re: pillow talk
If only they could talk, Marcus LOL. Thank you for the wonderful compliment! xo
Faith
Faith