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BALLOON
if you put me near a balloon
you should know that it will be popped soon
taking my thin little silver pin
and pushing it through the rubber skin
listening to the poor things air explosion
and watching it have a mini compolsion
you should know that it will be popped soon
taking my thin little silver pin
and pushing it through the rubber skin
listening to the poor things air explosion
and watching it have a mini compolsion
Published 26th Feb 2013
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26th Feb 2013 11:02pm
I liked it- simple-clever - bit of a sinister undertone lurking-- very nice- just not sure about "complosion"
27th Feb 2013 12:23pm
20th Mar 2013 4:30pm
Uplifting joy found through a mere toy.
Hark and oi thine poem brings to this boy.
Feelings and happiness and gladness.
Hark and oi thine poem brings to this boy.
Feelings and happiness and gladness.
30th Mar 2013 00:45am
20th Apr 2013 7:18pm
Wow, Lani <3 This is amazing <3 (this is my new, account, by the way x3 )
21st Apr 2013 5:04pm
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20th Jul 2013 2:44pm
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