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All Hail Caligula
I rape little children, corrupting their innocence
caressing their soft, young skin
playthings for my amusement, indulging my desires
I make them squeal with pleasure
Human mouths I use as toilets, squatting down at my feet
my warm stream to be swallowed
licking me clean after defecating, before cutting out their tongues
I hold endless banquets of gluttony and passion
feasting on my wife before tasting other supple delicacies
all the while my sisters kneel under the table, taking turns on me
orgies of bizarre sex, masses of twisted, grotesque positions
my wife in the middle sampled by many, my smile grows at the sight
for hours I defile my sisters and their husbands, before having them murdered
I kill for the enjoyment
small cuts, made slowly over days
dying painfully, lingering forever
I make the families watch every moment
my laughter accompanies the pleads for death
Heads on poles adorn my gardens
tortured expressions still fresh on the faces
the mouths tender and ripe to sodomize
as breakfast is savored between thrusts
I declare myself a living god, greater than Jupiter
a god of all gods worshiped by Rome
statues erected in my image proliferate the empire
Senators bow to me, their wives I violate savagely
sacrifices demanded, "throw everyone to the lions’ growls"
"Bound those who object, and rip out their eyes"
"Let them hate me as long as they fear me"
Three months I suffered of unknown sickness
my brain now diseased, ravaged by mental illness
touched by the devil, I’ve plunged into madness
my parents brutally killed, my brothers exiled to die
a childhood of depravity and debauchery forced upon me
reared to be a viper for the Roman people
I am a victim of Rome’s tyranny
The emperor has abolished all honest critiquing and friendly feedback. Worship is hereby decreed.
caressing their soft, young skin
playthings for my amusement, indulging my desires
I make them squeal with pleasure
Human mouths I use as toilets, squatting down at my feet
my warm stream to be swallowed
licking me clean after defecating, before cutting out their tongues
I hold endless banquets of gluttony and passion
feasting on my wife before tasting other supple delicacies
all the while my sisters kneel under the table, taking turns on me
orgies of bizarre sex, masses of twisted, grotesque positions
my wife in the middle sampled by many, my smile grows at the sight
for hours I defile my sisters and their husbands, before having them murdered
I kill for the enjoyment
small cuts, made slowly over days
dying painfully, lingering forever
I make the families watch every moment
my laughter accompanies the pleads for death
Heads on poles adorn my gardens
tortured expressions still fresh on the faces
the mouths tender and ripe to sodomize
as breakfast is savored between thrusts
I declare myself a living god, greater than Jupiter
a god of all gods worshiped by Rome
statues erected in my image proliferate the empire
Senators bow to me, their wives I violate savagely
sacrifices demanded, "throw everyone to the lions’ growls"
"Bound those who object, and rip out their eyes"
"Let them hate me as long as they fear me"
Three months I suffered of unknown sickness
my brain now diseased, ravaged by mental illness
touched by the devil, I’ve plunged into madness
my parents brutally killed, my brothers exiled to die
a childhood of depravity and debauchery forced upon me
reared to be a viper for the Roman people
I am a victim of Rome’s tyranny
The emperor has abolished all honest critiquing and friendly feedback. Worship is hereby decreed.
Published 26th Feb 2013
| Edited 17th Apr 2014
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Anonymous
- Edited 26th Feb 2013 5:54am
26th Feb 2013 5:52am
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You.
Are a bit scary at times.
O.o
Hey, where is the rhyming?
You.
Are a bit scary at times.
O.o
Hey, where is the rhyming?
Anonymous
4th Mar 2013 1:22am
Scary is all right xD everyone can be scary at times.
Well written, none the less.
Well written, none the less.
26th Feb 2013 8:24am
A sinister piece Mourningcloak with such vivid imagery.
You created a fine piece with Mr Caesar who became quite the monster it is said. Well done.
You created a fine piece with Mr Caesar who became quite the monster it is said. Well done.
26th Feb 2013 4:23pm
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Anonymous
- Edited 12th Apr 2023 8:45pm
28th Feb 2013 6:13pm
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Know the story well from numerous TV programs, so a little hackneyed.Even Hot Puss has done it. But on other fronts you have made great strides. Me? I still use pleonasms to keep the lines the same length or to shape the appearance of the poem. ;-).
3rd Mar 2013 8:14pm
I admire you for making the effort which is what counts. The only really brave people are those that do things in spite of their fears.
9 out of 10 on the 'IF' scale. The other 1? Keep you trying of course. Heh heh.
Terry
9 out of 10 on the 'IF' scale. The other 1? Keep you trying of course. Heh heh.
Terry
6th Mar 2013 3:42am
14th Mar 2013 4:13am
O M G !!! I take back what I said earlier.
You HAVE found your sanity, it seems.
You just made a new fan.
That was ... beyond words.
Probably my favorite poem of all time (out of what I've read, obviously) is "the raven" by Poe. Caligula was a sadistic mental giant, who was taken down by, well, you obviously know the story. He is kinda like an anti-hero to me, the kind of guy you love to hate, ya know?
You have to understand the decadence of the period to really understand the differences between him and the rest of the roman empire, not that i'm a historical genius, but anyone who reads this should thank you.
I want to "love" this, but I guess all i can do is "like" it.
I'll be back to check out some more of your writings. It's my nighty-night time. C U L.
You HAVE found your sanity, it seems.
You just made a new fan.
That was ... beyond words.
Probably my favorite poem of all time (out of what I've read, obviously) is "the raven" by Poe. Caligula was a sadistic mental giant, who was taken down by, well, you obviously know the story. He is kinda like an anti-hero to me, the kind of guy you love to hate, ya know?
You have to understand the decadence of the period to really understand the differences between him and the rest of the roman empire, not that i'm a historical genius, but anyone who reads this should thank you.
I want to "love" this, but I guess all i can do is "like" it.
I'll be back to check out some more of your writings. It's my nighty-night time. C U L.
16th Mar 2013 8:12pm
18th Mar 2013 5:47am
Because I so enjoy the dark and twisted and not even a week ago was reminded of this dear man that I can say you did and outstandin job on this piece.. it was vivid and honest nothing held back.. you didnt try to sugarcoat it and I love that when a pe move in the dark and do it as it was meant to be thank you for sharing this was a pleasure to read
20th Mar 2013 3:44pm
Hey, I'm new here.
I loved it.
I thought the imagery was vivid and vile and almost hard to the touch.
I love reading insular poetry like this.
I commend you both for the structure of the text.
I'm looking forward to reading more of your works.
I loved it.
I thought the imagery was vivid and vile and almost hard to the touch.
I love reading insular poetry like this.
I commend you both for the structure of the text.
I'm looking forward to reading more of your works.
23rd Mar 2013 5:59am
You captured the depravity of a tyranical monster with the power of a god.
6th Apr 2013 10:40am
This poem is perhaps one of the most intimidating that I have read, and I mean that as a compliment. Its disturbing and what I think makes it more so is that its based in history. Caligula was perhaps one of the most ruthless and sadistic human beings ever to walk this earth and I think that you captured his brutality perfectly without resorting to sheer shock value. The way the words are woven together are really extraordinary
7th Apr 2013 4:31am
7th Apr 2013 8:42am
Excellent .. Amazing ..And also wonderful ..You have the numbers secret to eternal immortality portal ..We are in the same way. Same immortality .Wait you with me there in eternal spending ..
1st May 2013 5:15pm
Dark as the devil nice writing it is true among many kings throughout history well written
Beautifully dark
The kind my friend would've written v.v
A pleasant read once again
One of the many that motivated me...
:3 (you're one in a million)
The kind my friend would've written v.v
A pleasant read once again
One of the many that motivated me...
:3 (you're one in a million)
28th Jun 2013 4:40pm
Wow
Truly an amazing write!!!
I now understand y so many may follow you and want your presence xD
Night_Begins...
Truly an amazing write!!!
I now understand y so many may follow you and want your presence xD
Night_Begins...
26th Aug 2013 9:27pm
I hope you dont actually mean this because I might have
To find you and blow your brains out killing adults is fine but children I hope you dont mean this child molesters will all be killed and please look someone in the eyes when you take there life
To find you and blow your brains out killing adults is fine but children I hope you dont mean this child molesters will all be killed and please look someone in the eyes when you take there life
23rd Sep 2013 1:54am
This is a great poem. It's deep, scary, and painful. Poetry is about expression excitement, going places others don't go. U definitely went places with this. Good job
10th Oct 2013 3:14am
well I gotta admit,that was pretty fucken heavy,having spent my life in the thick of it I tend to shy away,it's all too personal for me,it is however refreshing to find someone who can face the darkness head on,reading it was exciting, but any more than a good buzz is all I can stand these days. I am a guitarist,most of the things I write these days are usually a mixture of dark neoclassical themes but I did pride myself at one time on being strictly death-metal,guess I've gone soft,I can relate to a lot of the things you said in your profile,yea I checked you out,cool! I'll have to go back and read some more. Thanks for writing you're very good at it.
Anonymous
- Edited 14th Oct 2018 4:47am
22nd Oct 2017 9:12pm
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