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you loved me sweetly
driving down the highway
in my new XG-350
i'm listening to
a roy orbison cd
and thinking of
you and how
you loved me sweetly
wishing i could
turn back time and
be the person
that i was when
you showered me
with a love so strong
you loved me sweetly
when i passed
you on the road
and you waved to me
our eyes met
but only briefly
as you smiled so tenderly
it made me lonesome
for days gone by when, oh
you loved me sweetly
in my new XG-350
i'm listening to
a roy orbison cd
and thinking of
you and how
you loved me sweetly
wishing i could
turn back time and
be the person
that i was when
you showered me
with a love so strong
you loved me sweetly
when i passed
you on the road
and you waved to me
our eyes met
but only briefly
as you smiled so tenderly
it made me lonesome
for days gone by when, oh
you loved me sweetly
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Re: you loved me sweetly
26th Feb 2013 1:31am
....and I love THIS ink so sweetly!:)
So soft and lovely! The imagery was a nice extra touch! xo
So soft and lovely! The imagery was a nice extra touch! xo
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re: Re: you loved me sweetly
26th Feb 2013 1:36am
And you just made my hear smile really big! Thank you, dear lady! xoxo
Faith
Faith
Re: you loved me sweetly
Anonymous
26th Feb 2013 1:44am
Another great title to another beautifully inked piece. Excellent work, Faith. Enjoyed very much!!! :)
Carlene
Carlene
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re: Re: you loved me sweetly
26th Feb 2013 1:47am
Re: you loved me sweetly
Anonymous
26th Feb 2013 2:03am
So sweet! Lovely Poem! :)
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re: Re: you loved me sweetly
26th Feb 2013 2:22am
Thanks so much, Legacy! I appreciate your lovely comments very much :)
Faith
Faith
Re: you loved me sweetly
Anonymous
26th Feb 2013 2:14am
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re: Re: you loved me sweetly
26th Feb 2013 2:23am
Re: you loved me sweetly
26th Feb 2013 8:13am
I love driving and listening to my favourite tunes that bring back fond memories.
Tenderness indeed in this wonderful pen Faith. :)
Tenderness indeed in this wonderful pen Faith. :)
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re: Re: you loved me sweetly
26th Feb 2013 3:15pm
Re: you loved me sweetly
26th Feb 2013 1:59pm
re: Re: you loved me sweetly
26th Feb 2013 3:16pm
Re: you loved me sweetly
Anonymous
27th Feb 2013 2:02am
Very awesome write. Sad on the end though. Love your poems. :)
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re: Re: you loved me sweetly
27th Feb 2013 9:12am