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aSong(itself)Sung
thee song sung itself,
drift'liltin
hear & th'ere,
then
there-to-here,
'til it's[font=Times New Roman][audibility]vanishment
into that unseen'able
aether,
airing
out[of]reach[of]
( whatheycall )
'earshot'
~
You
have to
have heard it. such
a joyfulnoyze of clankin'clatter,
unto whisper'd[sweetnothings]into
thee Ear of Love, thee Lips
of Love
suckin suckling th'juice'o
a lifelike Life.......
~
No? Are ye sure?.....
bbbbblooding shame
to have
missed It[/font]
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drift'liltin
hear & th'ere,
then
there-to-here,
'til it's[font=Times New Roman][audibility]vanishment
into that unseen'able
aether,
airing
out[of]reach[of]
( whatheycall )
'earshot'
~
You
have to
have heard it. such
a joyfulnoyze of clankin'clatter,
unto whisper'd[sweetnothings]into
thee Ear of Love, thee Lips
of Love
suckin suckling th'juice'o
a lifelike Life.......
~
No? Are ye sure?.....
bbbbblooding shame
to have
missed It[/font]
XXXXXXXXXXXdkzk2013XXXXXfphoto:dkzkXXXXXX
Published 25th Feb 2013
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25th Feb 2013 8:52am
25th Feb 2013 12:24pm
o dear Muse,
may yr sayin such
not drive the Real Poets
unto Madness upon
[that-which-is-left-of]'me'.
yrstruly,
dkzk(poot)
may yr sayin such
not drive the Real Poets
unto Madness upon
[that-which-is-left-of]'me'.
yrstruly,
dkzk(poot)
25th Feb 2013 7:58pm
'joyfulnoyze' - that reads like a really good sneeze. Which is what any sort of joy should be like, I think. Who was is that said the best bit of a wave is the long blue quiet curl of a space it makes for an instant before crashing down...I can't remember, but your poem reminds me of that. I'm envious of the amount of stuff your beach combing must result in, but it's ok 'cause I get to read the lines and words that get shaken out of the sand along with the shells.
Hope Alice the dog is doing alright.
Hope Alice the dog is doing alright.
26th Feb 2013 00:30am
thank ye so much,dear
i wish ye was here so Alice & i could take ye on our
daily
'patrol'......wee keep a close-watch for N.Korean
submarines.
i wish ye was here so Alice & i could take ye on our
daily
'patrol'......wee keep a close-watch for N.Korean
submarines.
