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When you.....I feel

 

When you have washed my car and fill it up.
I feel you care for me a lot
When you open a door or hold out my chair
I feel their envy stare
When you make love to me, and wait until I come
I feel excited bliss
When you say, “I love you,” first before we fall asleep,
I feel it right back
When you, however, put the toilet seat down at night, so I don't fall in
I feel the God’s has truly blessed me once again.  
Written by Imagining (Glynis)
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