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i got it
I'm not sure if you did it on purpose
but it worked
you knew that i would get jelous
you wanted me to give my hopes up
but i still got them
the winner is the loser and the loser is still the same
so forget all your dreams
I tore them down from your silver lining
so pack your shit
and leave me
im done with you
im in the clouds on my way home
you can sit there and pretend dumb
but I'm all good
as long as i got my hopes
but it worked
you knew that i would get jelous
you wanted me to give my hopes up
but i still got them
the winner is the loser and the loser is still the same
so forget all your dreams
I tore them down from your silver lining
so pack your shit
and leave me
im done with you
im in the clouds on my way home
you can sit there and pretend dumb
but I'm all good
as long as i got my hopes
Published 2nd Sep 2010
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2nd Sep 2010 5:37pm
..You hang on in there girl - I got big hopes for your writing, Rosy - put the 'a' back in jealous for me, kill that first capital 'I' and you'll have nailed the style for this perfectly too.
Great work. Best ~ Abra.
Great work. Best ~ Abra.
