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They Murdered a Prostitute On the 66
They murdered a prostitute last night on the 66.
Under the night sky
The creepers crept.
Slowly stalking their prey as she paraded in high heels
And bent over to reveal a little less than underwear.
She had no idea of her fate.
A job well done, her last client was asking for more.
The last car passed and as light lost touch with her existence,
They sprung up;
The briers and thorns.
Cleaving to her curved hips.
Rape they said.
She was a night worker, they said.
Does that mean she deserved it?
I asked.
Under the night sky
The creepers crept.
Slowly stalking their prey as she paraded in high heels
And bent over to reveal a little less than underwear.
She had no idea of her fate.
A job well done, her last client was asking for more.
The last car passed and as light lost touch with her existence,
They sprung up;
The briers and thorns.
Cleaving to her curved hips.
Rape they said.
She was a night worker, they said.
Does that mean she deserved it?
I asked.
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Re: They Murdered a Prostitute On the 66
22nd Feb 2013 2:35am
Very sad poem. You captured this well the dark side of humanity is seen in the poem as well as compassion.
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re: Re: They Murdered a Prostitute On the 66
22nd Feb 2013 2:39am
:) yeah. Sometimes I feel like people are so judgemental that they forget how to be compassionate and humane. That's why I just wrote this. Just typed the words as they flowed into my head and clicked publish. Thanks for appreciating.
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22nd Feb 2013 2:52am
It happens a lot to. I see them on the news and such often, murdered, or committed suicide. They were human beings.
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Re: They Murdered a Prostitute On the 66
22nd Feb 2013 2:55am
Exactly! People forget that they could be somebody's mother or sister and that they are somebody's daughter. Somebody has a happy memory with them and though their lifestyle may not be what you agree with, their humanity is something worth respect. Dignity is the least we can afford them if we so desire to help them.
Re: They Murdered a Prostitute On the 66
22nd Feb 2013 3:09am
....and that 'night walker' had a name, she was somebody and her Life did matter! WOW!
This was such a powerful and somber write.
Thanks for sharing!
This was such a powerful and somber write.
Thanks for sharing!
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22nd Feb 2013 3:15am
Re: They Murdered a Prostitute On the 66
22nd Feb 2013 3:42am
I like how you addressed an actual issue, and put your opinion into it too.
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22nd Feb 2013 3:54am
Re: They Murdered a Prostitute On the 66
22nd Feb 2013 5:30am
I think about seeing this item in a newspaper, where it would simply state the facts, cold & dry. this is warm & cries a little...
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Re: They Murdered a Prostitute On the 66
22nd Feb 2013 3:57pm
That was POWERFUL sweets!!!!!!!!!!1
Awesome write and deeply felt!!
Great pen!!!!
Sir Lancelott
Awesome write and deeply felt!!
Great pen!!!!
Sir Lancelott
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