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a house without a heart
Her prison was a brown picket fence
surrounding an old brick house
of six strange sides
Inside
it was empty
© Indie Adams 2013
surrounding an old brick house
of six strange sides
Inside
it was empty
© Indie Adams 2013
Published 20th Feb 2013
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Anonymous
20th Feb 2013 10:49pm
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21st Feb 2013 3:02am
Thank you Gabriel for you lovely comment :) Glad this works for you in so few words
Peace, Indie
Peace, Indie
21st Feb 2013 6:31pm
A house without a heart might be empty but your poem does not lack heart and is definitely full of meaning. I enjoyed it very much!
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23rd Jun 2013 2:14am
a home is where the heart is....it's so true the emptiness the void...ty great stuff
23rd Jun 2013 2:29am
Thank you Tribal Buddha for your kind feedback. :) Glad you enjoyed.
Peace, Indie
Peace, Indie
