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Smitten
You help me understand
the beat of my heart through
the touch of your hands
By light of parchment shade
curled candles flame
absorb the heat
hold it
A fire that defines the night
stone to stone touch
spark
golden-edged ebony
and light
downward candle burn
sink soft to amber glow
Hearts unfold
as beats shift in the dark
hearing you breathe
calm of souls conjoined
Touch sparks your fragile frame
a healing balm of tender love
for the burnt places long scarred over
Hand colored canvas
paint beyond the lines
blend light to ivory skin
colors
senses entwine
Scrape of your nails
to my shoulder bare
quill scratch
love licked lines drawn
A song
not to sing
but to
define emotion
the notes overflow
soft
liquid slow
Your voice leaves footprints
upon my soul
Trace heart
finger touch to skin
it's rhythm
a statement beyond language
I
crave
to be
your air
the yearning which sustains you
Awaiting the other side of night
press words to rest
softly upon
curve of ear
In our resonate voice
barriers breached
hostage with consent
form outlined
and in your smile
I am
Smitten
the beat of my heart through
the touch of your hands
By light of parchment shade
curled candles flame
absorb the heat
hold it
A fire that defines the night
stone to stone touch
spark
golden-edged ebony
and light
downward candle burn
sink soft to amber glow
Hearts unfold
as beats shift in the dark
hearing you breathe
calm of souls conjoined
Touch sparks your fragile frame
a healing balm of tender love
for the burnt places long scarred over
Hand colored canvas
paint beyond the lines
blend light to ivory skin
colors
senses entwine
Scrape of your nails
to my shoulder bare
quill scratch
love licked lines drawn
A song
not to sing
but to
define emotion
the notes overflow
soft
liquid slow
Your voice leaves footprints
upon my soul
Trace heart
finger touch to skin
it's rhythm
a statement beyond language
I
crave
to be
your air
the yearning which sustains you
Awaiting the other side of night
press words to rest
softly upon
curve of ear
In our resonate voice
barriers breached
hostage with consent
form outlined
and in your smile
I am
Smitten
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Re: Smitten
Anonymous
19th Feb 2013 12:07pm
"Touch sparks your fragile frame
a healing balm of tender love
for the burnt places long scarred over"
I loved that stanza most, but I am smitten with the entire poem-beautiful, sensual-real!
yay for you!
Miki
a healing balm of tender love
for the burnt places long scarred over"
I loved that stanza most, but I am smitten with the entire poem-beautiful, sensual-real!
yay for you!
Miki
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Re: Smitten
19th Feb 2013 12:50pm
golden-edged ebony
and light
downward candle burn
sink soft to amber glow
Descriptions are fast paced,
yet leave impressions unmovable.
Very well written.
and light
downward candle burn
sink soft to amber glow
Descriptions are fast paced,
yet leave impressions unmovable.
Very well written.
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re: Re: Smitten
20th Feb 2013 10:51pm
Re: Smitten
Anonymous
19th Feb 2013 12:58pm
"I crave
to be
your air
the yearning that sustains you"
Sultry. Passionate. Clawing. Loved everything about this. Thank you for the read.
to be
your air
the yearning that sustains you"
Sultry. Passionate. Clawing. Loved everything about this. Thank you for the read.
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20th Feb 2013 10:55pm
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Re: Smitten
Anonymous
19th Feb 2013 2:00pm
Know those feelings Soul Man.
Nice write...
Strider :)
Nice write...
Strider :)
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re: Re: Smitten
20th Feb 2013 10:56pm
Re: Smitten
Yet again, you created a lovely write!
This was absolutely charming!
Im forever smitten with your work, SMK!
"Hearts unfold
as beats shift in the dark
hearing you breathe
calm of souls conjoined"<---Love this!
Wonderfully Inked! :)
This was absolutely charming!
Im forever smitten with your work, SMK!
"Hearts unfold
as beats shift in the dark
hearing you breathe
calm of souls conjoined"<---Love this!
Wonderfully Inked! :)
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20th Feb 2013 10:59pm
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19th Feb 2013 6:22pm
The English language is too simple in its words, to be able to express the feeling and beauty behind this poem. A true poet writing from the deepest parts of his soul. A rare gift to us all.
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re: Re: Smitten
20th Feb 2013 11:07pm
Thank you, Rachel. It is the thump thump of my soul... smitten and how :)
Re: Smitten
Anonymous
20th Feb 2013 3:25am
Ken, I'm almost speechless. *almost* - because I have to try. The feeling of this and the way you've described being "smitten" is one of the most beautiful things I've read in a very long time. Thank you for sharing it!
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re: Re: Smitten
20th Feb 2013 11:04pm
I appreciate you seeing what I feel and live; smitten and loving it. Thank you very much
Re: Smitten
20th Feb 2013 9:38pm
Nature boy you rocked this piece love the 1st and 2ND stanza especially.
Red
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20th Feb 2013 11:05pm