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puzzle
It's a puzzle
Putting these pieces back together
So fragile and so careful not to hurt them
Slowly as i put these pieces together
I see a picture begin to form
There's a lack of color
A lack of hope
Missing pieces i search to find
To put back together what one was mine
To fix the broken heart of the one i love
Binding the fragments to heal him
I wish so much i could steal your pain
Your regret
Your hate
I wish i could protect your broken heart
Take back the bad moments and remove their stain
Replace them with pieces time
The times we stole for ourselves
Piece by piece i put together
Memories and moments we made
You always said it would be forever
And I'll always be there to pick you up
Putting these pieces back together
So fragile and so careful not to hurt them
Slowly as i put these pieces together
I see a picture begin to form
There's a lack of color
A lack of hope
Missing pieces i search to find
To put back together what one was mine
To fix the broken heart of the one i love
Binding the fragments to heal him
I wish so much i could steal your pain
Your regret
Your hate
I wish i could protect your broken heart
Take back the bad moments and remove their stain
Replace them with pieces time
The times we stole for ourselves
Piece by piece i put together
Memories and moments we made
You always said it would be forever
And I'll always be there to pick you up
Published 18th Feb 2013
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Anonymous
18th Feb 2013 7:06pm
Love the way you've created the disjointed pieces...
Please do pen on, poet!
This was an enjoyable read ;-)
Cheers
Tidespotter
Ps. Was it your intent to omit verse breaks?
Please do pen on, poet!
This was an enjoyable read ;-)
Cheers
Tidespotter
Ps. Was it your intent to omit verse breaks?
18th Feb 2013 7:50pm
To be honest i wrote down how i felt when i was going through a hard time knowing i wanted to write about it and a year later i came back to it and thought it sounded good as it was and just posted it. I'm sure that makes it a little less impressive haha but thank you very much that's really encouraging :-)
24th Feb 2013 4:14am
