Miles Away

Short piece, with a thoughtful edge to it.
You might want to capitalize the beginning of a new line.
:)

Thank you Queen.  I had just copied and pasted from another site, and it formats very differently here. It will take some getting used to!

short but precise.....well done miss...

thank you John. I appreciate the read.

So few words yet so much said about the relationship between two people. Reminds me a touch of "So Close" by Hall and Oates.

Hope you enjoy the site.

Thank you Jazz. LOL. I'm going to have that song stuck in my head now.

then be careful---I have found that even some of my closest friends can't stand Hall and Oates.

LOL!  Well, I do remember them, but I can't say as they were ever high on my list of favourites.

Great read- love the form - no punctuation makes it seem immediate like it goes on even after the poem is done- like reading a billboard from a moving car-

thanks. I look forward to reading some of yours.

Wow sweets, drifting apart from someone..
That's deep...Loosing interest wtf....

Great piece sweets Loved the write and read!!

You give great PEN!!!

Sir Lancelott

LOL. Thanks Lance.

Welcome to DU! Awe! If there is love, turn around. :)

thanks for the welcome, and for the read/comment.  it's appreciated!

A very poignant and deep piece. Welcome to DUP

thank you for the warm welcome, and for taking the time to read and comment.

Short, but heavy...love it! Saying so much in so few words is tough but you did it-bravo