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Feel the vibes
When I am alone, I think of you
I feel so blue I really do
When you are around
I feel like smacking you
When you hold me in your arms
I feel so happy, I tremble for you
When you lie and I know it
I feel like garroting you with a nylon string
When you say you are sorry
I feel like you mean it
When you turn away and I’m alone
I feel like a fool, I've been had again.
I feel so blue I really do
When you are around
I feel like smacking you
When you hold me in your arms
I feel so happy, I tremble for you
When you lie and I know it
I feel like garroting you with a nylon string
When you say you are sorry
I feel like you mean it
When you turn away and I’m alone
I feel like a fool, I've been had again.
Published 16th Feb 2013
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16th Feb 2013 4:17pm
Anonymous
16th Feb 2013 4:45pm
Nice write Grace.
Good luck in the comp.
Strider!
Good luck in the comp.
Strider!
16th Feb 2013 5:07pm
16th Feb 2013 6:47pm
Nice one Grace. Didn't you recently edit this though? I think the original was so much better : )
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20th Feb 2013 00:09am
Nothing wrong in hope and expectations as long as you see them for the distortions that come with them. Bit like loosing a dog and replacing it with a cat and hoping for the same responses.
20th Feb 2013 00:32am
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20th Feb 2013 00:54am
No...not like that, it's nice quaint...the losing a dog and getting a cat bit. :-)
20th Feb 2013 2:04pm
That was just my humour and sorry if it came over as me being too sensitive.
20th Feb 2013 3:20pm
