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Loving You



Waiting in the cold
Trying to take hold

Of the frozen love
From the angels above

With the beating wind
I commit my sin

Continuing to regress
Straining to stress

Straining to emphasize
The beauty in your eyes

That it's never too late
So I continue to state

That I will forever love you
But You don't love me too

Written by ImmortalButterfly
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