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(in thee) Id'iot's Quadrangle/recurrs'o'Vanishment(as wee all)
#1:
doing thee gone way pass
past'way, thee interim[time]
passing th[time](just-an-other)
pastime,prime(primary)time(
relative irrelevance)
gong going dongdong
gone paster & paster
(all thee [any]time) ~
2a:
~ ithought youwere some
one\else.iyam someone
else. /contusion'fused
cry[sees](of)i'dent
ity:indemnity insured
as'surances a'many falsestarts
fin'ished,not-a-trace of
she(&herLove)as-it-were(as-
it-is)aforementioned assured/insured...
truly ithought(youwere)
some\one\else,as indeed
wee so Be (it) ~
pArtB:
~ being one wit thee other
when no other is 'home'/or/
no no home Is [any nor] an other,
concern poses deft,or daft,or(pro
bably)deaf, but blindly scene ~
part:f our:
~ wee young were once were wee once
young[?] pissin thee passion[s]
a'way for thee Way i'think'iKnow to pass
a piss[ion] off t'look like[as-if]any
thing eye[fckn] pleas
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doing thee gone way pass
past'way, thee interim[time]
passing th[time](just-an-other)
pastime,prime(primary)time(
relative irrelevance)
gong going dongdong
gone paster & paster
(all thee [any]time) ~
2a:
~ ithought youwere some
one\else.iyam someone
else. /contusion'fused
cry[sees](of)i'dent
ity:indemnity insured
as'surances a'many falsestarts
fin'ished,not-a-trace of
she(&herLove)as-it-were(as-
it-is)aforementioned assured/insured...
truly ithought(youwere)
some\one\else,as indeed
wee so Be (it) ~
pArtB:
~ being one wit thee other
when no other is 'home'/or/
no no home Is [any nor] an other,
concern poses deft,or daft,or(pro
bably)deaf, but blindly scene ~
part:f our:
~ wee young were once were wee once
young[?] pissin thee passion[s]
a'way for thee Way i'think'iKnow to pass
a piss[ion] off t'look like[as-if]any
thing eye[fckn] pleas
XXXXXdkzk2013xxxxxxpfhoto2013dkzkXXXXXXXX
Published 14th Feb 2013
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16th Feb 2013 1:08pm
s(he) was one'ce too much,
now t'SAY ow'ch though(t)
u/you well't z/sea 'll t'in
flu/moo tartart hear't ear
art s'ought me'he'art
now t'SAY ow'ch though(t)
u/you well't z/sea 'll t'in
flu/moo tartart hear't ear
art s'ought me'he'art
16th Feb 2013 2:31pm
& again,
ye
n'ailed
'it'
(so2speak,p'haps,
may
be)
bless ye, cookieManster
ye
n'ailed
'it'
(so2speak,p'haps,
may
be)
bless ye, cookieManster
16th Feb 2013 1:46pm
This part -
"~ ithought youwere some
one\else.iyam someone
else. /contusion'fused
cry[sees](of)i'dent
ity:indemnity insured
as'surances a'many falsestarts
fin'ished,not-a-trace of
she(&herLove)as-it-were(as-
it-is)aforementioned assured/insured...
truly ithought(youwere)
some\one\else,as indeed
wee so Be (it) ~"
immediately brought this man to mind
The Great Lament Of My Obscurity Three
where we live the flowers of the clocks catch fire and the plumes encircle the brightness in the distant sulphur morning the cows lick the salt lilies
my son
my son
let us always shuffle through the colour of the world
which looks bluer than the subway and astronomy
we are too thin
we have no mouth
our legs are stiff and knock together
our faces are formeless like the stars
crystal points without strength burned basilica
mad : the zigzags crack
telephone
bite the rigging liquefy
the arc
climb
astral
memory
towards the north through its double fruit
like raw flesh
hunger fire blood
-Tristan Tzara
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"~ ithought youwere some
one\else.iyam someone
else. /contusion'fused
cry[sees](of)i'dent
ity:indemnity insured
as'surances a'many falsestarts
fin'ished,not-a-trace of
she(&herLove)as-it-were(as-
it-is)aforementioned assured/insured...
truly ithought(youwere)
some\one\else,as indeed
wee so Be (it) ~"
immediately brought this man to mind
The Great Lament Of My Obscurity Three
where we live the flowers of the clocks catch fire and the plumes encircle the brightness in the distant sulphur morning the cows lick the salt lilies
my son
my son
let us always shuffle through the colour of the world
which looks bluer than the subway and astronomy
we are too thin
we have no mouth
our legs are stiff and knock together
our faces are formeless like the stars
crystal points without strength burned basilica
mad : the zigzags crack
telephone
bite the rigging liquefy
the arc
climb
astral
memory
towards the north through its double fruit
like raw flesh
hunger fire blood
-Tristan Tzara
Do you know him ?
Enjoy deciphering you :)
16th Feb 2013 2:29pm
know'im somewhat rather well--- Prince of Dada ---
Dada
made me what iyam(Mama too)
mygoo'dness....don'tKnow whatosay'cept
thank ye
Dada
made me what iyam(Mama too)
mygoo'dness....don'tKnow whatosay'cept
thank ye
16th Feb 2013 7:00pm
Dada? I'd disagree a bit there (and here).
The politics, yes, but your visual composition
just gives the impression(ist) at first glance;
the actual literary composition/meaning isn't
abstract enough (i.e. the damn stuff 'means' too
much). This, BTW, is a GOOD thing (IMHO).
The politics, yes, but your visual composition
just gives the impression(ist) at first glance;
the actual literary composition/meaning isn't
abstract enough (i.e. the damn stuff 'means' too
much). This, BTW, is a GOOD thing (IMHO).
g'odd bless ye,cookie, but
pleas
don'make me think-too-much (it's gettin t'where any is'a too-much).....
thank ye somuch for tuning-in....
(seems
aye have frequent 'dearths' there'in)
pleas
don'make me think-too-much (it's gettin t'where any is'a too-much).....
thank ye somuch for tuning-in....
(seems
aye have frequent 'dearths' there'in)
17th Feb 2013 1:09am
buttseriously, cookie......I
most value reflections such as yours here...
since my drivel dribbles is writ spontaneous wit little or no edit/revision,
what
ye say hereby does grandly to keep my ass in per'spective of it'sElf
most value reflections such as yours here...
since my drivel dribbles is writ spontaneous wit little or no edit/revision,
what
ye say hereby does grandly to keep my ass in per'spective of it'sElf
