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Your Lies
Pointing out, the lies,
hidden in your eyes.
I lay, the truth,
underneath the ice.
Your lies,
Your lies,
Will be your downfall,
will be your downfall,
will be your downfall.
never in the world,
will your actions be preserved.
All your bad intentions,
that includes all your connections.
Your lies,
Your lies,
Will be your downfall,
will be your downfall,
will be your downfall.
All the saints, will cry,
the moment that you die.
For they, were not,
the reason of your downfall.
Your lies,
Your lies,
Will be your downfall,
will be your downfall,
will be your downfall.
hidden in your eyes.
I lay, the truth,
underneath the ice.
Your lies,
Your lies,
Will be your downfall,
will be your downfall,
will be your downfall.
never in the world,
will your actions be preserved.
All your bad intentions,
that includes all your connections.
Your lies,
Your lies,
Will be your downfall,
will be your downfall,
will be your downfall.
All the saints, will cry,
the moment that you die.
For they, were not,
the reason of your downfall.
Your lies,
Your lies,
Will be your downfall,
will be your downfall,
will be your downfall.
Written by
southernmoonlight
(Southern Moonlight)
Published 14th Feb 2013
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re: Re: Your Lies
14th Feb 2013 6:15am
Re: Your Lies
15th Feb 2013 4:38am
I think this would be a pretty good song if it was performed. The will inevitably get what's coming to them. Good work
Chaos_Collector
Chaos_Collector
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re: Re: Your Lies
18th Feb 2013 11:56pm
I'd appreciate that Chaos_Collector... Although I'd need a band to perform this... XD I mean, this is better if it was performed as a rock song right?
Thanks. :)
Thanks. :)
re: re: Re: Your Lies
19th Feb 2013 1:05am
re: re: re: Re: Your Lies
19th Feb 2013 2:12am
Well, you could use this piece if you like to. Interpret it your way Chaos_Collector. XD
It would be fun to hear my words being sung by others more knowledgeable on music ... :)
It would be fun to hear my words being sung by others more knowledgeable on music ... :)
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19th Feb 2013 2:24am
Lol as much as I would love to, I have yet to finish my own song that I would like to perform. After I do a few perhaps I'll do it.
Don't stop writing songs though
Don't stop writing songs though
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20th Feb 2013 3:17pm
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20th Feb 2013 4:57pm
I have not. I don't have it up here at the moment since its incomplete
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21st Feb 2013 00:19am
So that means just in case you finish writing the song, you'll post it up here? :)
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21st Feb 2013 5:24am
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21st Feb 2013 5:34am
that sounds good. :) beep me when its online. I'm sure I'll like that stuff.
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21st Feb 2013 5:48am
Re: Your Lies
18th Feb 2013 6:38pm
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18th Feb 2013 11:54pm
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20th Jul 2013 2:45pm
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