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Feel
this world i am sick of it i just want to run away .
i hate how everything is i just want to dissaper.
my body has been broken five times in one year .
i feel like i am a bird trapped in a cage with steel and chans just waiting to die and never knowing how to fly.
i am so tired of this place i just want to fly away.
insted of crying late at night in a place that is to be my tomb.
so i search for a nice shinny blade and with it i start to cut my own wrists and watch the blood drip and fall till it makes a pool on the floor .
as my body slowly gets numb my mind then begin to thinks .
finelly i can dissaper from this cage made of steel and chans and this hell hole you call life !
i hate how everything is i just want to dissaper.
my body has been broken five times in one year .
i feel like i am a bird trapped in a cage with steel and chans just waiting to die and never knowing how to fly.
i am so tired of this place i just want to fly away.
insted of crying late at night in a place that is to be my tomb.
so i search for a nice shinny blade and with it i start to cut my own wrists and watch the blood drip and fall till it makes a pool on the floor .
as my body slowly gets numb my mind then begin to thinks .
finelly i can dissaper from this cage made of steel and chans and this hell hole you call life !
Published 13th Feb 2013
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24th Mar 2013 10:47am
Again you have a real depth of expression and inner strength that comes through in your writing.
I obviously don't know who you are writing about but if they are young then you should suggest that they somehow record what is happening and take it to 'Child Protective Services.'
Be careful in your advice though...However it is essential that the person finds a constructive way to change their lives.
I obviously don't know who you are writing about but if they are young then you should suggest that they somehow record what is happening and take it to 'Child Protective Services.'
Be careful in your advice though...However it is essential that the person finds a constructive way to change their lives.
27th May 2013 5:55pm
