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My Funny, Twisted Valentine..................
"Sometimes you can get *some*
and still get *none*
until the right *one*
cums along
and digs in so damned deep.....
......knocks you off ur feet
Puttin' your firm round azz
flat on your back singin'
“Pain is in my heart”............
…....causing me to suffer "
an acute attack of a…......
…....“Heartbeat, you make me feel so weak”
Deeper than hot lust,
can you feel that thick,delicious, hard dick
startin' to bust
on the inside.........
turning you out
Makin' you shout his name
Ain't no shame
to give that regal brother
just a little bit of high praise
for that which he "dared" to share
with you babe."
“Sometimes love has no rhyme; has no reason at all”
And whilst I'm askin'
in the midst of all of our red hot passion........
….....what's got you grippin'
Got you hitchin' yo 'self
so tightly
to my bed post?
Legs wide open
toes pointed towards the sky
Deep inside that sweet honey pie, I take cover
while you take me on this delicious “Thigh Ride”
The bed is banging the wall
Hips slow rolling and taking it all
and yes that's a lot to take
every delicious stroke hittin' the bottom of your ocean
flesh slappin', butt shakin', Mmmmmmm
“It's grrrrrreeeeeeaaaaatttttttt!!!!”
I'm cummin' out baby
Still hard and stiff
Pussy le Creme, her mouth is open
“Give me some more”.....still etched upon your supple lips
“…......Nothin' means as much
Nothin' seems to touch
Your smile
If anything I'd miss
Never could resist
Your smile......”
I gaze into your eyes
as my body rest between the comfort
of beautiful brown
wet, spent thighs …........
My beautiful, tiffany twisted valentine
You are and shall always be mine.......because
"Sometimes you can get *some*
and still not get *none*
until the right *one* …........cums
Happy Valentine's : )
Published 13th Feb 2013
| Edited 15th Feb 2013
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Well, this was completely unconsciously written, unscripted........a free thought coming from that "untapped" 70% of my mind. Ain't taking no credit or responsibility what showed up within this ink. Definitely a free formed thought. I guess I'm entitled to one of those every now and then ; )
Enjoy......or not : )
Enjoy......or not : )
13th Feb 2013 6:40pm
13th Feb 2013 6:59pm
".......This is for all the lonely people
Thinking that life has passed them by
Don't give up until you drink from the silver cup
And ride that highway in the sky
This is for all the single people
Thinking that love has left them dry
Don't give up until you drink from the silver cup
You never know until you try........."
How does that read into this poem?.......the power of dreams. ; )
Thanks for the read and the comment
Thinking that life has passed them by
Don't give up until you drink from the silver cup
And ride that highway in the sky
This is for all the single people
Thinking that love has left them dry
Don't give up until you drink from the silver cup
You never know until you try........."
How does that read into this poem?.......the power of dreams. ; )
Thanks for the read and the comment
13th Feb 2013 7:13pm
13th Feb 2013 6:54pm
lol...yes, it seems unconsciously written and unscripted. haha...
So, what's really going on with the other 70% of your twisted uncensored sexy mind?!Your erotic ink is a sculpture of you, Archie. Men and women study the chisel engraving of your pen.....Speaking for myself, you set the bar for your very own ink high... Anything less is just 'twisted' :) xoxo
Love the imagery.....
So, what's really going on with the other 70% of your twisted uncensored sexy mind?!Your erotic ink is a sculpture of you, Archie. Men and women study the chisel engraving of your pen.....Speaking for myself, you set the bar for your very own ink high... Anything less is just 'twisted' :) xoxo
Love the imagery.....
Girl Puleeaaase! LOL (but thank you just the same). I think I'm just fighting the doldrums on the eve of Valentine's Day. Reminiscing on a different time and better days.
Shant not be a wet blanket though. That other 70%, subliminally transmitting my strong eros to certain "receptive" minds >:-p~~
Shant not be a wet blanket though. That other 70%, subliminally transmitting my strong eros to certain "receptive" minds >:-p~~
13th Feb 2013 7:21pm
"Love the imagery....."
;-) I find myself constantly searching for imagery that will satisfy my craving to unmask what lies "beneath that coat" lol
;-) I find myself constantly searching for imagery that will satisfy my craving to unmask what lies "beneath that coat" lol
13th Feb 2013 7:07pm
My music man!!!! You know how to form a teen's blush in a grow woman's cheeks. THIS was awesome! And not too worry, the pieces I have on this site, I literally just flow from. None of my pieces I take time on are here. I'm vulgar, & releasing fantasies right off the dome when I'm with u guys. Xoxoxo
You're one of my faves.
You're one of my faves.
13th Feb 2013 7:12pm
"My music man!!!! You know how to form a teen's blush in a grow woman's cheeks."
Now, that made me smile. : ) Always look forward to your comments CeCe.
Now, that made me smile. : ) Always look forward to your comments CeCe.
13th Feb 2013 7:19pm
Anonymous
13th Feb 2013 7:31pm
MrM,
If your goal was to put Hallmark and Dove chocolate out of business this 14th; go right a head and check that off your list! I like your free stylin' Bro!
tornado
If your goal was to put Hallmark and Dove chocolate out of business this 14th; go right a head and check that off your list! I like your free stylin' Bro!
tornado
13th Feb 2013 8:43pm
Thanks Windy-T........Dove Chocolates? Let's go get Whitmans while we're at it. LOL
Anonymous
13th Feb 2013 9:34pm
LOL!!! Ms Whitmans it is....
Ms. Whitman said let me be your chocolate
boys, I have a plan
I'm deep and dark and creamy
and melt in your mouth as well as your hands
Ms. Whitman said let me be your chocolate
boys, I have a plan
I'm deep and dark and creamy
and melt in your mouth as well as your hands
13th Feb 2013 10:36pm
13th Feb 2013 11:42pm
You bare a very sexy brain MrM. You make ink come alive and tease and touch us(me). Even your freestyling leaves me in, mmmmmm ;-)
14th Feb 2013 6:27am
Thank You De
Wishing you and yours the most enticing Valentine's Day. : )
Wishing you and yours the most enticing Valentine's Day. : )
14th Feb 2013 6:17am
I must say I thoroughly enjoyed this and the picture is simply stunning! Hoping you and your lady have nice fantasies about unmasking that coat on Valentine's Day! If she is anything like you, and she sounds like she is, she will have no trouble receiving your "subliminally transmitted strong Eros." :)
14th Feb 2013 6:29am
You are so sweet Scarlet and thank you for the comment. I simply wish that I could get her to to take me serious : (
15th Feb 2013 7:23am
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14th Feb 2013 2:56pm
Thank You Kasupuu. I hope that you and your "special stranger" are feeling "something" today as well ; )
