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Deja View
Softly singing
each step I take
melody comprised
with swirls and warmth
breaths of you
exhaling truths of the heart
haunting notes that displace
the harsh of winter
friendship's spark
lays bare the blackest nights
tasting fire in the wind
timeless rhythm created
joyous expression
written in heart smiles
formed deep within
I give breath from my soul
honor and delight knowing
no fear with you
soaring on these seas
music painted in the skies
enduring todays obstacles
with this gift of harmony
untainted treasure
each step I take
melody comprised
with swirls and warmth
breaths of you
exhaling truths of the heart
haunting notes that displace
the harsh of winter
friendship's spark
lays bare the blackest nights
tasting fire in the wind
timeless rhythm created
joyous expression
written in heart smiles
formed deep within
I give breath from my soul
honor and delight knowing
no fear with you
soaring on these seas
music painted in the skies
enduring todays obstacles
with this gift of harmony
untainted treasure
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Re: Deja View
12th Feb 2013 3:21pm
WOW! SMK, this is Gorgeous! The entire poem awed me!
I really loved, "I give breath from my soul
honor and delight knowing
no fear with you.."
Beautiful Ink! :) xo
I really loved, "I give breath from my soul
honor and delight knowing
no fear with you.."
Beautiful Ink! :) xo
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re: Re: Deja View
14th Feb 2013 2:18pm
Thank you Rain for steadfast sweetness and the aura of beauty you share erewith us here!
Re: Deja View
12th Feb 2013 3:31pm
Very beautiful, indeed...simply amazing poem, Ken. There are too many great lines for me to pick a favorite, love them all. :)
Faith
Faith
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re: Re: Deja View
14th Feb 2013 2:19pm
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Anonymous
12th Feb 2013 4:21pm
You are a great poet Soul Man....Loved it.
Strider
Strider
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14th Feb 2013 2:20pm
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12th Feb 2013 4:24pm
re: Re: Deja View
14th Feb 2013 2:21pm
It is the beauty that inspires my soul that I find wondrous, thank you Magdalena
Re: Deja View
12th Feb 2013 7:00pm
"honor and delight knowing
no fear with you"
Truly!
This whole piece is more beautiful than any word I know in the English language. You touch my soul in so many way's Ken. <3
no fear with you"
Truly!
This whole piece is more beautiful than any word I know in the English language. You touch my soul in so many way's Ken. <3
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re: Re: Deja View
14th Feb 2013 2:17pm
YOU are these humble whispers of my soul, Rachel.
Thank you for such a beautiful friendship!
Thank you for such a beautiful friendship!
Re: Deja View
12th Feb 2013 7:07pm
music painted in the skies
enduring todays obstacles
with this gift of harmony
untainted treasure
Enchanting, wonderfully simple.
enduring todays obstacles
with this gift of harmony
untainted treasure
Enchanting, wonderfully simple.
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re: Re: Deja View
14th Feb 2013 2:22pm
Re: Deja View
14th Feb 2013 2:24pm
and there -
"knowing
no fear with you"
is the jist of it right there.
Thoroughly enjoyed this Ken :)
"knowing
no fear with you"
is the jist of it right there.
Thoroughly enjoyed this Ken :)
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re: Re: Deja View
17th Feb 2013 11:41pm
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Anonymous
14th Feb 2013 3:25pm
A wonderful write, enjoyed reading this one..talent shines through, as always.
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17th Feb 2013 11:41pm
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Anonymous
26th Feb 2013 6:56am
*tasting fire in the wind* what a line!
Like totally loving this!:)
Like totally loving this!:)
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6th Mar 2013 4:57pm
Re: Deja View
5th Mar 2013 8:31am
I can't choose any favorite line, I love the whole poem, and thoroughly enjoyed reading it. great write, Soul Man.
-Mira
-Mira
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6th Mar 2013 4:58pm