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suicide
you say goodbye to your loved ones
thats when you'll last be kissed
go in your room and take out the knife
put it to your arm and slice your wrist
thats when you'll last be kissed
go in your room and take out the knife
put it to your arm and slice your wrist
Published 12th Feb 2013
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12th Feb 2013 3:41am
12th Feb 2013 1:50pm
12th Feb 2013 10:24pm
13th Feb 2013 00:02am
Sweet and to the point.Like well positioned death trap this one is stuck on me.
13th Feb 2013 00:12am
13th Feb 2013 00:15am
Alright.. Very predictable and not very interesting. Slashing wrists is always something to write about but you need some metaphors, be more descriptive, build me a picture to capture in my mind, these will improve your poetry and you as a poet. Remember correct punctuation as well, always do a proof read before posting.
Well done anyway.
Well done anyway.
13th Feb 2013 7:18pm
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