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Seduced By A Louisiana Woman
“.......The air was thick with danger,
I watched the vixen dance
My six gun in my pocket,
my pistol in my pants.......”
That synaptic feeling
That chemical, neuro, electrical response
that caused my eyes to close tightly
in the morning before light
A familiar, seductive, surrealistic touch
causes my clear, copious juices
to flow from my scarlet head
and yet...........
.......feeling just like some kind of zombie
Spiritual eyes wide open
dangling like an efugee to the walking dead!
The last thing I see this side of heaven
are those deep, hypnotic brown eyes burning through
What kind of voodoo is this
coming through the beauty of you?
Louisiana woman............
“........I let her walk up on me, she pinned me to the door
She said “she swore she knew me, we'd never met before”
She pressed up hard against me, I stared into her eyes
She grabbed my face and kissed me, she had me hypnotized....”
Faster than my Sportster cruisin' down I 95
Transferred through dreams,
like an eagle I begin to fly.....
….....into another dimension
that only you control
Bypassing my body, consuming my very soul
Kisses.........
from black lips so sweet
they paralyze everything
between my head and my feet
well..........almost everything
my big brown meat so swollen
heart beating and feelin' mighty hard
Her blouse falls open , revealin'
I can only utter 3 words
“O my God”
“..............She took me to her bedroom, smelled like a cheap hotel
Never had a Cajun queen, I'm used to Southern belles
But through the smoky billows of my tobacco leaves
I watched her in the mirror as she was makin' love to me.....”
Like a pale Ghost Rider,
she rode me until my body burned
Pleasure through all the pain,
she took me to the point of no return.
I cum and I cum..... I came
like a fountain in the midst of the dark black woods
My body aches, my form shifts into twisted shapes
Toes curled tightly.............I feel mighty fuckin' good!!
“...........This spell you got me under,
got just one remedy
Just like a poison potion,
that goes down smooth and sweet.......”
Memories of a fine, smooth brown liquor.......
...…..I awaken wet and cold
Stretched out naked 'cross Texas St just past Milam
Lost and confused; trouble in my soul.
Feelin' something wicked in the wind
Something wicked this way comes............
That old voodoo you do Louisiana woman
We've only just begun.........
“…...”The snakes and gators, whisper in the wind
I hear her callin' to thee
I turn around again
the cry of a creole woman
Woke up the devil down in me.......... “
Authors Note.....(thanks to one of my guilty pleasures for this inspiration, "Louisiana Woman' by Toby Keith and the images of a "certain Louisiana Woman" never far from the surface of my mind)
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