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Seduced By A  Louisiana Woman

         
“.......The air was thick with danger,          
I watched the vixen dance        
My six gun in my pocket,          
my pistol in my pants.......”
       
         
That synaptic feeling        
That chemical, neuro, electrical response        
that caused my eyes to close tightly        
in the morning before light        
         
A familiar, seductive, surrealistic touch        
causes my clear, copious juices        
to flow from my scarlet head

and yet...........
        
.......feeling just like some kind of zombie        
Spiritual eyes wide open        
dangling like an efugee to the walking dead!        
         
The last thing I see this side of heaven        
 are those deep, hypnotic brown eyes burning through          
What kind of voodoo is this          
coming through the beauty of  you?        
         
Louisiana woman............        
         
“........I let her walk up on me, she pinned me to the door        
She said “she swore she knew me, we'd never met before”        
She pressed up hard against me, I stared into her eyes        
She grabbed my face and kissed me, she had me hypnotized....”
       
         
Faster than my Sportster cruisin' down I 95        
Transferred through dreams,          
like an eagle I begin to fly.....          
         
….....into another dimension        
that only you control        
Bypassing my body, consuming my very soul        
         
Kisses.........        
from black lips so sweet        
they paralyze everything          
between my head and my feet        
         
well..........almost everything        
         
my big brown meat so swollen          
heart beating and feelin' mighty hard        
Her blouse falls open , revealin'        
I can only utter 3 words          
“O my God”        
         
“..............She took me to her bedroom, smelled like a cheap hotel        
Never had a Cajun queen, I'm used to Southern belles        
But through the smoky billows of my tobacco leaves        
I watched her in the mirror as she was makin' love to me.....
”        
         
Like a pale Ghost Rider,          
she rode me until my body burned        
Pleasure through all the pain,          
she took me to the point of no return.        
         
I cum and I cum..... I came        
like a fountain in the midst of the dark black woods        
My body aches, my form shifts into twisted shapes        
Toes curled tightly.............I feel mighty fuckin' good!!        
         
“...........This spell you got me under,          
got just one remedy        
Just like a poison potion,          
that goes down smooth and sweet.......”
       
         
Memories of a fine, smooth brown liquor.......        
...…..I awaken wet and cold        
Stretched out naked 'cross Texas St  just past Milam        
Lost and confused; trouble in my soul.        
         
Feelin' something wicked  in the wind        
Something wicked this way comes............        
That old voodoo you do Louisiana woman        
We've only just begun.........          
         
“…...”The snakes and gators, whisper in the wind        
I hear her callin' to thee         
I turn around again        
the cry of a creole woman        
Woke up the devil down in me.......... “        
       
         
         
Authors Note.....(thanks to one of my guilty pleasures for this inspiration, "Louisiana Woman' by Toby Keith  and the images of a "certain Louisiana Woman" never far from the surface of my mind)
Written by MusicallyMrM (Mr_Mahogany_Wood)
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