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Haiku I
sheer sorrow
never leave
me
~ ~
my lover
- last moon -
my forgetting
~ ~
full moon tonight
and you're leaving
adieu my friend
never leave
me
~ ~
my lover
- last moon -
my forgetting
~ ~
full moon tonight
and you're leaving
adieu my friend
Published 25th Aug 2010
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25th Aug 2010 4:39pm
25th Aug 2010 8:00pm
Anonymous
25th Aug 2010 8:02pm
Agree with the above, this is wonderful. So lovely and tender. Your haiku are amazing!
25th Aug 2010 8:12pm
25th Aug 2010 8:47pm
25th Aug 2010 11:01pm
26th Aug 2010 7:34pm
So simple and yet it retains a certain beauty. Im not a fan of haiku's, but I certainly could take that opinion back for this one! Well done. :)
27th Aug 2010 2:24pm
28th Aug 2010 11:47am
