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Q and Q

I wonder on the same question
That I've wondered from the time I could comprehend
� � � � �What I really wanted from life.
Worth more then value projected by men
Worth more then the need to survive in a confused world
worth more then love that anybody can give.

I seek change..
Change from the normz of society's
Usual tendecies
I seek a unified people that will fight till the pyrimids
Way of life is lost
A nation that will fight to abolish salvary
So that we may move on from our savagery
Greedy scheming and ploting the downfall of another
Rather living for another to live
Man kind the dog to mankind the god

I wonder I wonder.............
Fall asleep �and awake in hell

Written by Zeal

Published 5th Feb 2013

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Re: Q and Q

Anonymous

- Edited 5th Feb 2013 11:05pm

5th Feb 2013 11:04pm

Welcome to this cool site, Zeal.

Do hope you will have a swell time here :-)

Love your poem. Sentiments are well expressed.

Great energy!

Small observations, if I may?

*I seek a unified people that will fight till the pyrimids
(spell-check typo on last word...maybe?)

*Greedy scheming and ploting the downfall of another
(spell-check typo on...."plotting")

*A nation that will fight to abolish salvary
(spell-check typo on last word....?)

Thanks for sharing.

Pen on, poet!

Cheers

Tidespotter

Ps. Your title...means? Curious....:-)