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MY GIRL
She had been with me a few years now
in that time she has been good to me
the last time i saw her she was stood on the drive
and then she went through the gate
the last thing i saw of her was her large backside
she dissa peared down the road ,maybe feeling hate
she had been faithful trusting and reliable
it might bea good thing we have split
it may bethe right time for a change
i hope that man who took her away
takes good care of her
and gives her a regular service
she would like that i know
i am sorry we fell out of love
i have a new car now
i hope she is as good
in that time she has been good to me
the last time i saw her she was stood on the drive
and then she went through the gate
the last thing i saw of her was her large backside
she dissa peared down the road ,maybe feeling hate
she had been faithful trusting and reliable
it might bea good thing we have split
it may bethe right time for a change
i hope that man who took her away
takes good care of her
and gives her a regular service
she would like that i know
i am sorry we fell out of love
i have a new car now
i hope she is as good
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Re: MY GIRL
Anonymous
5th Feb 2013 6:14pm
You had me going for a bit. Cool write. Enjoyed. LOL!! :)
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3rd Mar 2013 11:29am
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Re: MY GIRL
16th Aug 2014 12:07pm
Know exactly how you feel....
I felt like a traitor giving up my car of 11yrs but she didn't go far.....my son has her & I see her at least once a year.... :)
I felt like a traitor giving up my car of 11yrs but she didn't go far.....my son has her & I see her at least once a year.... :)
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