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Letting go
I'm hanging from
a cliff wanting
to let go.
To fall down
and be mauled
be the rocks.
A short pain
and then
the final
release.
a cliff wanting
to let go.
To fall down
and be mauled
be the rocks.
A short pain
and then
the final
release.
Published 4th Feb 2013
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4th Feb 2013 6:51pm
Very emotional,
as most of your poems are.
I enjoyed this greatly,
powerful, powerful.
Well written,
Scribbler
as most of your poems are.
I enjoyed this greatly,
powerful, powerful.
Well written,
Scribbler
4th Feb 2013 7:03pm
Thanks a lot! Yeah, it's about feelings but I am opposed to suicide. Almost always it isn't a solution.
Anonymous
5th Feb 2013 1:05am
Short and powerful words. I feel this way alot, but friends like are worth staying for. :)
5th Feb 2013 1:53am
Anonymous
5th Feb 2013 8:28am
Nicely written image about letting go...
