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Amber Eyes
Apart of my heart that will never rest
Trying to move on and keep life at its best
but memories and dreams keep returning
nothing I can do, will stop my soul from yearning
this pain I feel
is something i fear, will never heal
try as I must, try as I might
there is nothing I can do to win this fight
so all I do is look to the skys
and think, love, and dread her Amber Eyes
Trying to move on and keep life at its best
but memories and dreams keep returning
nothing I can do, will stop my soul from yearning
this pain I feel
is something i fear, will never heal
try as I must, try as I might
there is nothing I can do to win this fight
so all I do is look to the skys
and think, love, and dread her Amber Eyes
Published 21st Aug 2010
| Edited 23rd Aug 2010
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21st Aug 2010 9:53pm
21st Aug 2010 9:57pm
The last two lines were golden and you managed to work all the feeling and say everything you needed to say in those two verses. Kudos. [:
23rd Aug 2010 10:21pm
thank you. i didn't really expect to have it turn out like this. i actually didn't even want to i started it in spite of a friend telling me to write a poem to try and help my mood, get things off my chest.
but again thank you for your comments i am glad it is liked
21st Oct 2011 6:08am
