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Hand on arm
never an armchair of love.
kiss my elbow raw
and I'll lick your gums.
bath me in your hair.
Hand on abdomen
emergency button.
red raw lines blur
redifine arquitecture
of the body.
Stars reconfigure
in your inner lips
your hips hold up
the universe
like amazonian feline fish.
Colossal woman edifice.
I am an ant
I pull on your thin hairs
a love tickle.
but you squash me
quick and simple.
never an armchair of love.
kiss my elbow raw
and I'll lick your gums.
bath me in your hair.
Hand on abdomen
emergency button.
red raw lines blur
redifine arquitecture
of the body.
Stars reconfigure
in your inner lips
your hips hold up
the universe
like amazonian feline fish.
Colossal woman edifice.
I am an ant
I pull on your thin hairs
a love tickle.
but you squash me
quick and simple.
Published 20th Aug 2010
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27th Aug 2010 10:39am
An odd, abstract take on love/sex. I like it, it's strangely alluring but seductive. I think this is a great poem, good job! :) If you want you can check out some of my work. I dunno, maybe you will like it?
